The sick,
the dieing,
the hurt,
the poor.
People screaming,
for help,
for love,
for someone who cares.
People pray for the day,
a Savior will come along.
To hear their cries,
pleading for help.
There is one man,
one God,
the almighty, who would hear them,
and be there for them.
~ He would save them. ~
The hurt and pain
would soon go away,
for the one who cares,
is always there.
So live to help,
help the living,
helping the cries,
heals the wounds.
Author notes
Thank you so much for allowing me to enter this comtest.
Written October 14th, 2006
A contest entry
- Service to others by Spiritual Poet.
350 points, ended October 22, 2006, 11 entries
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Very well done and well spoken. It is true that he world is full of pain and plenty are crying out for help. Opportunities to help others are not in short supply for sure. Thanks for entering. God bless you, Mark
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This shows true insight for one so young! Full of hope and inspiration! Well done! Thanks for sharing this uplifting write! Blessings and hugz,
Love Auntie Frog~
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Well done Jacky....the flow was smooth...the structure was good and the theme fit the contest picture well....Proud of you boy....Dad.
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