Spooky creatures of all sizes and shapes will haunt
And taunt
All because they want
Candy, sweets, and ghoulish delights
Ghosts, Witches, and lions oh my
As they walk by
Ever so sly
They creep by
I run to my home
Where I am no longer alone at home
Ding, Dong the doorbell rings
I thought ghouls with wings
But instead and ladybug with wings
I realize Halloween is evolved to happy day
Instead of decay
Of the dead day
Ghouls and Creeps scare no more
When they come knocking on my door
I know what is in store
Knocking at my door
Author notes
Please do tell me what you think, this poem was done at the spur of the moment, hope you like
Written October 14th, 2006
A contest entry
- Halloween Happenings by Heavenly Angel.
300 points, ended October 30, 2006, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 2008 Allpoetry Halloween Bash by Little Eagle.
12350 points, ended November 21, 2008, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Thank you for your entry
For a spur of the moment poem, it is very good. Some editing would be good though. In your line "But instead and ladybug with wings" I think you meant 'an' instead of 'and'. Also you didn't need to repeat Home in your third stanza. Otherwise good job.
Thank you for entering. Good luck in the contest and thank you for following the rules.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment
Happy Halloween and God Bless
Tammy
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Excellent
It's a fantastic spur of the moment poet.
Such a perfectly penned piece of poetry.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us.
*S* Cynthia
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Adorably sweet
Adorably sweet and cute capture of spooky halloween. Good work! Keep it up. This brought the day of the dead alive :-) -
Very cute sharing! You captured the spirit of the contest perfectly! Thank you so much for being a part of the contest! Well done!
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