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Jack O Lantern (Rhyming Acrostic) {Bronze}

Jack O Lantern


Just as the fall season begins
All around we see pumpkin grins
Children all clad in their costumes
Kindred spirits flying from tombs

On this magical night, haunted

Let nothing keep you undaunted
As you fill goodie bags with treats
Next door the sounds of running feet
The laughter and screams inviting
Exuberant and exciting
Relax when the candy is gone
Now that the children are all done


Joyce Le Lievre
(sunny day)

October 14, 2006

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Trick or treaters delight on halloween night.

Picture courtesy of; www.panix.com
Written October 14th, 2006

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  • sunny day
    November 10, 2006
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    draco, Thank you for the lovely words you gave to me here. This was fun to do and then to win a trophy for it was even better. I'm very happy that you enjoyed it. Love and God bless, Joyce


  • sunny day
    October 19, 2006
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    Kevin, Thank you for your sparkling words here, they put a smile on my face. Unlike the Jack O Lantern I do have all my teeth. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this piece, it was fun to write and it was nice to win a trophy with it also. Love and God bless, Joyce


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 19, 2006
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    IT WILL BE HERE SO VERY SOON

    I can see the children going from door to door now The ghosts, pirates, queens, and all of the rest.


  • sunny day
    October 17, 2006
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    Michael, Thank you my dear young friend, both for the applause and your lovely words. I'm very happy you enjoyed this and have a happy halloween. Love and God bless, Joyce


  • SMario15
    October 17, 2006
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    nice acrostic Joyce


  • sunny day
    October 16, 2006
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    Rosemarie, Thank you very much for the applause and your lovely words. I always wait till the last minute to get that chocolate candy because I would have to go get more after eating it. I'm very happy that you enjoyed my trick or treat and thank you for the congratulations. Love and blessings for you my dear sweet friend, today and always. Joyce


  • Inside and out
    October 16, 2006
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    This is lovely Joyce. Your words flow with the excitement that comes with Halloween. A beautiful rhyming acrostic that is wonderfully alive. Well done dear poet. Congratulations for winning your well deserved award.


  • sunny day
    October 16, 2006
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    Desire, Thank you so much for the applause and your lovely words. I also want to thank you for the congratulations, this was a fun write to do and I'm very happy that you enjoyed my treat for halloween. I will be stopping by your entry as well. Love and blessings for you my dear sweet friend, today and always. Joyce


  • sunny day
    October 16, 2006
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    tearz, Thank you for hosting and for the shiny bronze trophy sitting atop the mantle on my home page. This was really fun to do. I enjoyed it so much and it brought back many fond memories. Love and blessings for you my dear sweet friend, today and always. Joyce


  • sunny day
    October 16, 2006
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    John, Thank you so much for your lovely words to me, this was such a fun write to do. Puts you in the halloween spirit. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this and thank you for the congratulations. I will be headed to your entry as well. Love and blessings for you my friend, today and always. Joyce


  • sunny day
    October 16, 2006
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    Linda, Thank you so much for the lovely words you gave to me, they were as sweet as that candy that we all love. OMG, I love dark chocolate too. I am such a chocoholic. Thank you for the congratulations and I'm very happy that you enjoyed my halloween treat. I also missed your entry, I will stop by to leave a treat for you. Love and blessings my dear sweet friend, today and always. Joyce


  • Desire gold member
    October 15, 2006
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    Magnificent Verse!!

    Congratulations on Your trophy win!!
    Magnificent verse You have penned!
    Love Acrostics and enjoyed this one very much
    Thank You for sharing this Masterpiece!

    Many blessings to You
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Frozentearz
    October 15, 2006
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    Congratulations on your award
    this was a wonderful treat and a delight to read,
    warm thoughts
    Frozentearz


  • Arkbear gold member
    October 15, 2006
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    huggzzzz

    Woo Hoo!....cool write!

    congrats on your trophy....there were a lot of entries....you did well my fellow Poet....love the flow..the structure and the rhyme was cool....nice job!

    Sincerely...Arkbear.

    I'm John btw


  • sunny day
    October 15, 2006
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    Frogz, Thank you very much for your lovely words. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this piece. It was a treat to write, not a trick. LOL Love and blessings for you, today and always. Joyce


  • sunny day
    October 15, 2006
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    Terry, Thank you very much my dear sweet friend, both for the applause and your colorful comment. I think we all entertain thoughts of doing the same. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this halloween piece. Love and blessings for you, today and always. Joyce


  • sunny day
    October 15, 2006
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    tearz, Thank you very much for the lovely words and for hosting this wonderful contest. It was a delight to do this one. I'm very happy that you enjoyed my choice of words to use. Love and blessings for you my dear friend, today and always. Joyce


  • sunny day
    October 15, 2006
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    Kelly, Thank you very much for the applause and your lovely words. I too remember having to go home and empty out the bag to finish up because we lived in a housing project and there were so many doors to go knocking on. We were in candy heaven. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this and thank you for the good luck wishes. Love and blessings, Joyce


  • sunny day
    October 15, 2006
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    Kari, Thank you very much my dear sweet daughter for your lovely words. Thank you also for the best wishes. I'm very happy you enjoyed my trick or treat. Love always, Mom xoxoxoxoxo


  • sunny day
    October 15, 2006
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    Firequeen, Thank you very much for the applause and the great comment. I'm very happy that you enjoyed my halloween spirit. I'll have to be getting a pumpkin soon. We don't like to put them out too early, the kids get a little rambunctious in the neighborhood at times. LOL Love and God bless, Joyce


  • Frogzter gold member
    October 15, 2006
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    This one brings back a lot of fond memories! Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!'
    Frog~


  • October 14, 2006
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    Excellent

    Joyce, this Poem made me think back of when I used to go Trick or Treating when I was younger, too be honest if I could get away with it.. I probably would still go trick or treating, lol. Keep up the great work and best of luck to you in the contest.

    Cheers
    Terry


  • Frozentearz
    October 14, 2006
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    I also remember my Halloween as a child
    truly it is a magical night, Like this magical Acrostic
    thank you so much for joining in the fun.. I love the word you picked out well done,
    Happy Halloween. Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • wings of an angel
    October 14, 2006
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    Joyce this is a wonderful acrostic that you had penned here, I remember halloween as a child, all the scary costumes that is my sons favorite time of year, he loves going door to door to get treats. Good luck in the contest


  • Kari gold member
    October 14, 2006
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    good

    awww Momma this is wonderful.You've done a great job.Thanks fo sharing and the best of luck to you in the contest!

    Kari


  • Firequeen
    October 14, 2006
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    Joyce i like his
    very uplifting and sweet
    Very well written.

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