An eccentric musician Tammy
Well known,from Mobile,Alabamy
People came from afar
Watched her play her guitar
In the moonlight in her pajamy
Author notes
Option 2.
Written April 29th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Fantastic Options Contest by wakingdevil.
313 points, ended April 29, 2006, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - LIMERICKS by Swan song.
800 points, ended July 1, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - New Contest!!!! by leslielovesthomas.
300 points, ended November 9, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Limericks ... by ecrivain01.
450 points, ended May 12, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - MUSIC-RELATED POEMS URGENTLY REQUIRED FOR LIVE SHOW... by Vera Rich.
1275 points, ended July 30, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Limericks! by marmac.
400 points, ended November 9, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Limericks by piccola.
650 points, ended April 15, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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this is so cute. I love the word pajamy ... and Alabamy too. Thanks so much for the entry.
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Very entertaining, Scribe. 
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Cute write here
Good luck in the contest and do you have any more you can enter more
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This is cute and very well written. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for submitting this... It is interesting but not really witty enough for our show. As I said in the rules, Limericks need to be exceptionally well done to make an impact in this kind of show.
I shall come back to it later though, when I complete my judging.
So please do NOT remove it from the competition until I have had a chance to judge it and until all the bonuses awarded. I do not have time to do this today - I have to concentrate first on selecting possible poems for the show.
And please, if you want it to appeal to me more when I judge it - please change the colour of the font to BLACK (red on pink is agony to my eyes)... and REMOVE the word "Limerick" from the title. Pointing out the form in this way is NOT a good idea - it implies that the reader might not recognize it otherwise, and hence that either that the writer has doubts that he/she has not used the form properly or that he/she does not trust the reader to recognize it. Which - as I was taught in the early days of my training as a writer is one of the best ways to prejudice an editor or competition judge AGAINST one's work.
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great
you just put a smile on my face and I needed that. Thank you,Boog -
This is cute!! Thank you for entering and good luck!
Leslie -
Excellent limerick funny with a cute punch line. Very good.
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that must have been some pair of pajamy...very cute play on words here, creative. Best of luck to you in the contest...PK
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HAHAHAHHA!!! Very cool! Picturing this made me laugh out loud, especially loved 'pajamy'...very cool rhymes and images here. Thanks for writing n sharing.
Char
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Good
I liked the word pajamy.Good mix.Well done and keep it up.Thanks for your entry! -
lol... funny stuff here! Good Luck in the contest!
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hehe, that's really cute. i like this. i like how you used 'pajamy'...lol...nice word choice. it flowed really well too. good job. keep it up.
Firefly -
He he this is good!! I also am impressed with the words you've used to make it rhyme!! V good, thanx for entering and good luck! ~Jo~ xxx
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props for creativity! I love 'Alabamy' and 'pajamy'...sounds like something my sister would say.
-the Magical Miss Moonrider
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