Lost in your eyes,
shimmering dark.
Enraptured,
the windows of your soul.
Your gentle caress,
sultry kisses.
Let heaven's gate,
open.
Guide me to the staircase
of Nirvana,
climbing high...
oh so high.
Twined of passion,
bodies mingle
and sigh...
Sweet sensations,
thighs besprent of lust's nectar,
hips ripple, flowing.
Each step of Love's dance,
ageless,
as time stands still.
Euphoric waves
collide,
crashing orgasmic shores.
Your release of ecstasy
burns deep into my soul.
Unified,
as one,
baby, make me lose control.
Author notes
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Written October 13th, 2006
In a list
- Cups of Gold • next in list
- Sensual and Erotic • next in list
- Against the Ivory (inspired by music) • next in list
A contest entry
- The Open Door by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
300 points, ended October 15, 2006, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thank you very much, appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Very nice job! Wonderful use of words and metaphor to take this to a higher level. So sensual and passionate, but with so much classy.
A true master piece.
Congratulations on the Gold! -
Thank you very much, I greatly appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Magnificent Masterpiece!
Congratulations on Your trophy win!!
Magnificent verse You have penned
I need to get a hold of the new CD~~
Beautiful creation of this Masterpiece
Thank You for sharing Your talent!
Many blessings to You!
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank you Kari, appreciate the comments and the compliment.
Storm -
Congrats on your win sis you sooooooooo deserve it Your a wonderful writer
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Thank you Ktulu, glad it was something you liked. Appreciate the comments.
Storm -
Oooh..this is very good. I loved this. You have definately gone beyond my expectations of this title. Thank you for entering and good luck to you.
*Ktulu Blackwolfe* -
Thanks hun, appreciate your comments always.
Storm -
Ooh yea girl, this is seductive. Such sweet penning from the sweet Storm. I love this. Good luck in the contest.
Vickie -
Thank you Jeannie, glad you liked hun.
Storm -
Thank you John, your comments are greatly appreciated.
Storm -
WOW! Just magnificent!! Whew. This was sooooooooo sensual and beautiful. The Goddess reigns!! Wonderful flow and rythm. Did I spell that right?! Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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great
Well wow would seem the way to start this comment. This is so well written and with such emotion and form, You have done an outstanding job here. Your words evoke images in the minds of the reader, great job. Blessing John
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