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Together We Scream

Where does our hopes lye now?
When the stars that carried our dreams faded
And the world is so cold and harsh
They can no longer see what lies within our hearts
But they judge us by the black we wear

Death obsessed? - Maybe
Scared? - Only a little
Hurt? - All the time
Hopeless? - If you only knew
Scarred? - Both physically and emotionally
Alone? - NO!


millions of us stand together in the shadows,
Watching, waiting, for the moment that we
Will rise from this Hell we call "Society"
And show hat is truly in our hearts

Everyone is different,
Yet we are the same

We all feel the same emotional pain,
Our blood is red when it comes out
Of a wound made by a razor blade,
Our hearts scream for one thing,
Do you know what that is?
Do you?
It's for understanding

United we stand,
Together we scream,
One heart, different sounds


                  UNITED AS ONE,
       WE SCREAM AT OUR SO CALLED "SOCIETY"!!!

Author notes

This is my mix of patriotic Goth/Punk/Emo/Rocker/Vampire/Wiccan/whoeverorwhateveryouaretoanybody outlook on our \
Written October 13th, 2006

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  • Little-Kiowa
    October 16, 2006
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    thank you

    Thanks love.
    I guess this could be a song!
    Thank you love.


  • she will be loved
    October 14, 2006
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    Awwwww just so true and powerful,This is all our anthems,From your heart and soul,This is just so amazing hunny.....
    It's like a song to me.....