Silhouetted form glowing softly in
The moonlight as I serenade her with
A velvet whisper through the crisp yet misty
Air a song of sadness I’m not closer
To the princess of my dreams as I draw
Her eyes upon me with a song to melt
The darkened sorrow of her giving heart
An open doorway where I feel the warmth
That’s hidden by the sadness in her long
And lonely starlit horizon’s vision
A vision of loveliness as she takes
My hand to lead me on a journey of
Discovery and exploration as
United freely on a path found deep
Within the gaze she locks to mine desire
Heartbeats creating symphonies in the
Heavens moving together in perfect
Harmony nearing as no distance but
The shiver of unified breath between
Us one soul one hope one dream you and me
One dream you and me together laughing
Joined united celebrating passion
Shared in fields of lilac beds of satin
Under moonlight in the dawn through dusty
Twilight as together facing all adversity
Yet as our bodies become combined
In lust electric bound in eyes wherein
Is found the shadows and the light unite
The open soul released an angel on the
Breeze when all have found blessed ecstasy
In blessed ecstasy a breeze where I
Am brought upon to fall upon my knees
Yet locked within a gaze of love that binds
Two souls upon the night crystal dance
In frozen light exploding in her sight
Spouting geysers in the stardust of the
Twisting gods that dance and play within the
Deepest old recess’ legends lore and myth
And erupting to these heavens wrapped
Two souls combining heartbeat rhythm kissed
Author notes
made this to these rules only:
a: they are ten syllables a line
b: they are ten lines per stanza
that’s all
Feel free to critique me, but be prepared for me to ask “why” in response, this is how I learn.
A note on syllables: I have a speech impediment, have had since birth, one of the ways to mask it is to learn to ‘slide’ over certain stress points using intonation changes rather than jaw movements, it is done in certain types of music although I don’t know its correct name. Anyway, once it becomes a habit it gets hard to count all the correct syllables, I know I have made some mistakes as far as the structure I have set out is, feel free to point them out.
A note on content: I was holding it together story wise pretty well I thought for the first bit but the last seven lines or so is just fill through the eyes of a blazing migraine, don’t worry about the last bit it was just to finish it.
Written October 13th, 2006
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Its dreamy and uplifting, sensual and filled to the brim with love, absolutely gorgeous Adrian.
A warm and loving poem making me wanting that too
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dutch2lips
Thanks for the comment Anne, I am glad that you like it
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i loved this one.
i felt like i was starring at you while reading this piece...
muwah -
I'm glad you liked it, missing you as well
A great deal
Adrian -
beautifully penned my dear.
i enjoyed reading it
thank you for sharing
missing you
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