What is it I should be?
What is my "destiny?"
They tell you what to do,
and how to live,
but they don't tell you how to do it.
How do I move on?
I always get sent back to square one.
Never really making progress
how do I stop this?
Always left wondering how
so many people can always smile
and how they make their lives worth while.
I'm stuck here again
frustrated to no end
and still I wonder...
Author notes
Not sure on the title of this. Suggestions are welcomed.
Written July 16th, 2006
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Hmmm...I think the title and the poem has a good connection already. When I read the poem, I had this uncomplete feeling. And then I looked back at the title, it sorts of completed the thought.
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i think that it would be good if the title was Square one ... it is a very good poem! it must just flow out of you! i love the background! good choice
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this was very beautifully writen..... alot of very good questions being asked and i odnt htink anyone really has the answers to them...it sucks life is very hard and to think that someone out there has a life even harder teh nmine this cycle jsut never ends....very good write
keep it up
krissy -
thank you!
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I can relate to this ver well. A feeling that creates conflict. I enjoyed reading this, the words blended well, and the structure is very good. You got your message across cleary, and the confusion is there. Keep up the good work
~Burkeer~
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