Seems like everyone else has a plan,
but where's mine?
I don't know where I want to go,
what I want to do,
they say it'll come in time,
but I doubt that.
I haven't the hope or faith;
The risks outweigh the reward in my mind
Why do things have to be so hard?
Is it so bad to want things simplified?
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Written May 15th, 2006
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I enjoyed reading this. Words blended well, rhyming was good, and so was the structure. You wrote a very good poem. Your ending line i thought was perfect, left us answering the question and looking at our own views. Cheer up, sometimes you have to risk things even if the reward is not worth it.
Burkeer
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