Heat seakah...
Trying my best to locate your hot spots,
as I'm kissing you, sucking your lips,
Ooh baby I'm so hot.
I look in your eyes
I whisper, "I love you."
You can tell it's not a lie
then you say, " I love you too."
Another deep passionate kiss
as we prepare to take ourselves deep into bliss
I know what my gurrl meant when she didn't wanna miss
a night like this.
So take your sidewinder and seek my hollow heat seeker
my eyes then open wide and I gasp as you enter me, deeper, and deeper.
Carefully moving in and out until your sidewinder explodes
but no climaxing yet, we've got a long way to go
to show
that making love like this you've surely let me know
That even after our wedding night
your love for me still grows.
"OOH!"
Please don't mind my loud moans.
Cause I drip in between when I hear your deep groans.
Don't mind the nail prints in your back
I'm in ecstacy baby I can't help that.
Your deep chocolate complexion
ignites my affection
my hunger increases
as I "UNH," leak out with essence.
In...and...out
don't mind my screams and shouts
well I know you don't cause it's YOUR name that comes out
of my mouth.
though it makes you explode down south.
But that's what happens when your love is deeper
in my hollow heat seakah
Author notes
Written October 13th, 2006
A contest entry
- Making Love With That 1 by Savior2Songz.
300 points, ended October 14, 2006, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie Contest By Aurielle by Aurielle.
300 points, ended September 24, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PASSIONATE LOVE by Expression.
575 points, ended October 15, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Awesome job, I really liked it. Good Luck!
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wow i really like this. hmm heat seekah? well it fits the poem well lol great imagery in this one rite here thanx for enterin and good luck!
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wow this was really good. I thought it was sexy how I could hear the moans in it the way you put it there. I wanted though some metaphors to make it more complex but its still sexy though I can't lie this was really good. Thanks for entering
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This is a marvelous piece of work. Isee that you aced the gold as well, oh well deserved. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing
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EXCELLENT!!!
congrat!! I knew it, I really enjoyed it alot!! -
EXCELLENT!!!
this is so hot girl, you and Blak one of yall will win!
good luck! -
OOOOOOOOOH shorty this is tight so far the best one I read yet nice job now this is what I am looking for OK I see you, you are doing your thing girl you keep doing what you are doing shorty you are on my favorites for a reason and poems like this you will be on there for ever kwwp up ok and let God led the way hollar back shorty oh yeah we need to talk, you say you had something to tell me
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damn gurrl..you did a damn good job writin this. your poem focuses more on the physical aspect of makin love, but i like it!!! great job gurrl.
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Damn! That was HOT gurrrl. You put it down in this contest. This gots to be a winner. I guess one time is enough huh? LOL. But anyways, I love your flow. I see you tryna rhyme like me.LOL. Let's see if I can dominate this.
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