Her sobs float in the air like a poisonous lullaby
They reflect the inner soul, that wishes to die
The razor skillfully breaks the fragile skin
You can't clean the mess you left her in
Her soul is painted in self mutilation and self hate
By the time you find out what she's planning it will be too late
You fed on her misery and tore her apart
You eagerly murdered this girl's vulnerable heart
In the dead of night she goes outside
Fleeing into the shadows where she'll say good bye
About to leave behind all her worst and tormenting dreams
She was never as stable as she seemed
The night shadows die with the upcoming sun
What was going to happen is now over and done
In the approaching light for everyone to see
Was her pretty corpse hanging from a tree
Author notes
ehh dunno what to say. it sucks! comment plz =]
Written October 11th, 2006
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this is really sad..and like the other two said you did an excellent job on writing it..graphics and emotion..great job
love ya
ur ap twin
shantel
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I agree with SilentCry, this is an awesome poem Is! I liked it a lot, and it ryhmed! Sorry it took me so long to comment, it took forever to download the site, so I just gave up. Awesome write!
ME
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It doesnt suck.. Its very.. Whats the word.. aaah i dont know, but like, the imagery is very good. Graphical!! <<cant spell.. Yeah.. you can really seee the images.. And its really dark. I liked it
xx
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