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Butterflies

She justs laughs about it
Butterfly images creeping into my head.
Fluttering in my stomach.
Making me litterally lovesick
Eating away at my insides
So, now I am bleeding away my beauty.
Throwing up my butterlies.
Each day my head in the toliet
Do you think I am beautiful
And I'll swear that there is nothing wrong,
I've just been having a bad day.
I left you a note.
You found it on the bedroom floor.
Next to my bloody butterflies
And this grotesque little poem,
It's all for you.
And everything you put me through
And you know that this is just the aftermath
Of a day here alone
I hope you know this is all you fault.
Me and my pen well fill this page with hate.
And I don't even know how to express myself

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I am not sure that this really fits the contest but it is about butterflies, kinda, so i thought it was worth a shot.
Written October 12th, 2006

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  • Faerie.Princess
    October 12, 2006
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    this is a beautiful and sad poem and yes it fits the contest. you had so much emotion in your poem and it was just amazing. good luck in the contest and keep writing
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