My broken heart is beyond broken,
To no repair.
Between fights with friends,
And love falling through thin air.
I don't think I have anymore to spare.
A true love i thought i would find,
But in the end a friend i would find,
In the arms of the guy I thought was mine.
More pain I feel as I learn,
A good friend has died,
I didn't even get to say good-bye.
As my faith grows thin,
I ask god why, why me?
Yet I still can't seem to cry.
Almost lost my job,
Friends are falling apart,
Another trying to kill him self,
And i don't know why.
I ask my self what is life for,
If you can't help the people you love?
Through all this pain and suffering I have felt,
With all the loss around me,
I still can't bring my self to cry.
Please help me to start a new,
And change the old from becoming true.
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Written October 12th, 2006
A contest entry
- Break My Broken Heart by Poetic-Dreamer.
300 points, ended October 19, 2006, 10 entries
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Well that last stanza hit me hard! I don't want the old to become me again because I can't live though that again. You tried to relay all thats happened and that great. Good luck but the friend with the other girl and the one who tried to kill himself are the same guy. Good luck
NoL -
I know your pain, and the despair of being beyond tears anymore. Pain can be healthy though, so we should look at it as something that will make us stronger for our next encounter with the unknown. Great write and best of luck in the contest.
-Nick
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