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my cute girl

in the bottom of my heart
i want to take your smile and put it in the sky
to see each star as a kiss that melts my desires
in bottom of my mind i want to have wings to fly around your heart
and take away your pain with my warm and sweet smile
in the bottom of your nightmares i want to be the light and turn our souls on fire, to feel how our emotions fuse in a perfect romance
in the bottom of the reality
i will wait.
until our eyes hit each other with the ray of love
to free my dreams and the pain that seals my heart into your smile
i want to release all my emotions to heat your fears
i want to turn your life into a garden of roses
to see you grow and become my endless love
in the bottom of my soul
i want to be holding your hand
until the eternity turn us in one and live together
with the power of our love
we will make another star



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Written October 12th, 2006
Ladybug lands on lee

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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 26, 2008
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    Love poems always need something new.. like your final couplet!


  • Miss Chievous
    November 24, 2008
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    That was very pretty!
    Good Luck!


  • Dusty Rose
    October 14, 2006
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    beautiful

    wow..this is so romantic.. very heartfelt and tender.. I love the feel I got from this just so loving

    take care
    much love
    Dusty


  • confused-lovingit
    October 14, 2006
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    nice write thanks for entering my contest good luck