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Kiarna and Chopper (Gold Trophy)

Kiarna and Chopper

As puppies go he’s quite the dude
Happy and playful, never rude
He frolics about the whole day long
Playing and singing his puppy song

He loves his mistress, always there
Gives puppy kisses to her, so fair
They share a friendship, oh so deep
Whether awake or if they’re asleep

Kiarna knows, and Chopper, too
This wonderful love, oh so true
Will last forever and a day
The family knows he’s here to stay

So get well quickly, Chopper, dear friend
Kiarna’s sad ‘til you’re on the mend
You’ll end up with a few little scars
Just stay away from fast moving cars

For Kiarna and Chopper
from your AP Grandma, Granny Goose



Dee Garner
© October 12, 2006

Author notes

Chopper will be up and running in o time, Kiarna...don't you worry
Written October 12th, 2006

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  • Warrior-Eagle
    February 21

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    Had you not told me that this was you,
    I would have thought that
    this was a very different
    person writing this because it's very different
    the form I mean.
    But it is good nonetheless,
    you are making me use big words lol

    ...Simply Me♥

  • J aime Coudre silver member
    December 28, 2007
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    OMG

    that side bar picture looks like Kobe...

  • J aime Coudre silver member
    December 28, 2007

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    So did Chopper make it okay...I take it this isabout a dog...I can't even imagine losing Kobe to a car...nice poem and deserved the gold ...LF

  • Just4u
    November 25, 2006

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    Duality revealed

    Ah with life comes good and bad
    Some days happy, some days sad
    But through it all we tend to grow
    Each day, new day, our love to show

    Hugs...Eddy


  • Granny Goose silver member
    October 15, 2006
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    Awww, Kiarna, thank you so much for the Gold trophy for this poem. I feel so honored that you selected it. And I hope Chopper is feeling better

    Love and s
    Grandma

  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    October 15, 2006
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    Hi there...CONGRATULATIONS!!! yayyyyy!!!

    A super poem...

    ~Lilac

  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    October 15, 2006
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    Wonderful write for Chopper Congratulations on your gold. So well deserved
    Gaylene

  • April Renee
    October 12, 2006
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    im not sure i liked the rhyming too much...but besides that a really good read. simple and sweet. good job. good luck in the contest.

    blu

  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    October 12, 2006
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    Hi Kiarna's grandma

    This is an excellent description of Choppers playfulness and how much he is loved, a lot of care went into this lovely piece ~

    ~Lilac

  • PoetryPuppy
    October 12, 2006
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    thank you Grandma Chopper has to wait until next week because his paw is still badly infected so the vet couldn't operate yet, I love this poem, and I love you Kiarna

  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    October 12, 2006
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    Wonderful

    What a beautiful tribute to Chopper and Kiarna. I know she will really love this
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