Is it?
That within your eyes I see
Stars sparkling in the lap of infinity?
Is it?
That within your eyes I find,
Love abloom seeking kindred kind?
Is it?
That within your eyes I feel,
A familiar soul, strong and genteel?
Is it?
That within your eyes I seek,
Tranquility wrought by truths we speak?
All that I have said, I have seen.
Copyright 2006, Jason Yarbrough
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Written October 11th, 2006
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Is it? A reflection of what my heart speaks?
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Is it a ?
A poem of a master writer
That makes the world seem brighter.
A very neat style and well written. You need to tap yourself on the back and applaud yourself.last stanza should have used the sense of hearing. You have spoken of seeing feeling . That's the way I feel. Think aboput it. -
Danke
Sehr gut, mein Schatzi
Expressive, taut and filled with emotion. You've managed to express falling in love without the usual cliches. You're poem is simple, short and says it all, that's the way poetry should be. Keep penning poet!
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cool piece..I have written using starts as a way to espress love before...Isnt it funny how simple and good a poem can be. your peom did that. it was quick but good. nice job.
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Oops...I'm sorry... I see I already commented on this as my Granny Goose ID....I'll send you your points, didn't mean to waste them.. I do like the poem, though...whoever I am...lol
Dee
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aww...
this was very cute,
i really liked the opening stanza,
it drew a person into the rest of the poem
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Good poem
Great work,very well written,Romantic and true,Cute poem Lisa K Haslett raytown Missouri! -
I miss your wonderful work!!
yours is still beautiful and poetic! I love it! Yay for your fabulous pen!
<3 Love always
Rosita -
Jason, It is sooooooo wonderful to see you writing again, Ive missed your poems and you my friend so much. This is beautiful, its nice to see you writing something so romantic and hopeful. I hope all is well with you. Take care
Suzanne
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Awww, it's nice. My favorite lines are
"That within your eyes I see
Stars sparkling in the lap of infinity?", that's quite unique. Thanks for sharing this, if it's based on fact, sounds like a wonderful love. Best wishes
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wonderful
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Awww... you have given the eyes the credit for which they deserve in this romantic poem The eyes are said to be the window of the soul and I believe they are... we just need to see through them clearly for the message they have for us.
I like this nice piece, it holds much hope and love within it's lines.
Good job
Dee
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good
this is very sweet, tender and romantic. You did
a good job of expressing a yearning and a desire.
This caught the readers attention and flowed very
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Nicely done. I bet you get a lot of women to get into your van.....
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Gorgeous piece, simple and expressive
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This was very sweet to read. I hope whoever you wrote this for appreciates the romantic in you!
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oh how sweet! i can feel the hopefulness in every line of this poem. it is lovely.
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