Heaven reaches down, delivering a single kiss
And just for a second, all of life’s darkness is cast into the abyss
Whispering serenity back into the soul of one who has long been dead
Author notes
Haven't posted much of my artwork lately and so I thought I'd share this with you guys here on AllPoetry. The three lines below the picture is just something I came up with rather quickly just to attach with the picture.
Original background was designed by me using Bryce 5. Photomanipulations were done using Photoshop CS. Entire picture is done by me.
I'm currently trying a new style of artwork... doing more space like themes. This is an example of that. Please let me know what you think. Any other artists on the site, if you have any suggestions on how I could improve upon the picture, let me know.
If you like this picture, feel free to use the wallpaper I designed. If you do, though, let me know about it 
i56.photobucket.com/albums/g173/sharcu/sunsetplanet.jpg
Written October 11th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Options or Anything!! AP Graphic Designers Step Right Up!! by Zenda-Lokki.
700 points, ended July 4, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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this is just beautiful!
i really like how everything fits together!
i wish you the best
of luck in this contest!
~CarnalNineTailedFox -
Wow
Just a taste of heaven?? Rather huge slice if you ask me hehe. -
Heaven reaches down, delivering a single kiss
And just for a second, all of life’s darkness is cast into the abyss
Whispering serenity back into the soul of one who has long been dead
wow your poem and border are stuning good luck in the contest
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... nods... didnt seem like you came up with those three lines quickly - they had SUCH depth in them. This picture is REALLY kool too
you have tallent bro NMNM
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absolutely the best
I saw the work of an artist once who did surreal paintings. They were a little similar to these - and they were gorgeous.
This is just electrifying. Love it!
hugs Wolfie - more, more, and then some more!! -
Thanks The main point in me posting this is the picture, the poem is just a little thing I came up with to go along with it. Glad you liked it
--Tim -
awesome
the most coolest part of this poem is the picture. it is so awesome. poems like theses are cool but sometimes i want words. other times it just depaneds but right now it is the other time. nice picture and awesome picturs in contests and your poems. keep up the awesome work.
Yellow Fall Leaf -
Oooooh...
I don't know if I should say much. It almost feels like I'll ruin it. The picture is... wow... and the poem is perfect and amazing... ah! i don't want to say much. i don't think i could do it justice.
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Beautiful!!! I loved it!!
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WHOA!! I am in AWE of this, it's absolutely beautiful....stunning......breathtaking. I love the colors and the peacefulness of it. It is definitely a taste of what God has to offer, and I'm not sure I can find the correct words for his awesomeness. Gorgeous! Excellent job on this.
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OMG its absolutely stunning Sharky. Breathtaking to say the least. I loved the colours and the way the whole photograph had a serene yet vibrant aura.
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Really little brother... this is just a fantastic picture... and your words lend to it as well... it's terrific... perfectly done and inspires peace and tranquility!!! My goodness... I LOVE IT!!!! I hope that you don't change anything... or add anything or take away anything... it looks divine just as it is... perfection!!!!
You know Tim... I've said this before but it's worth saying again, I am so proud of you... you are growing up to be such a fine young man... as a mother myself... I'd be proud, so very proud of you!!!!!
with sisterly love, Melissa -
Absolutely beautiful. The words fit the picture perfectly.It would be somewhere I could imagine sitting at the end of a busy day with a glass of wine taking in the view. Breathtaking. And as for the words, I don't know what to say. It is so beautifully captured in just those 3 lines. Well done and keep up the great work.
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Yep, been doing graphic design for about 4 or 5 years now. If you want to see other images I've made, check them out here:
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Thanks I could have probably gotten a better result if I had put more time and effort into it. I thought about adding more of a space like sky blended into the sunset to fit the planet scene... but I think it turned out well for now. I'll be playing more about with this theme and if I come up with anything else, I'll be sure to post it.
--Tim -
this is utterly BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! im so jealous. i wish i was at that place right now, its just so pretty that you can picture youself being there.thanks for sharing it with me!
XOXO
Kara -
I'm at a lost for words Tim. The artwark is just mind blowing WOW
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amazing
Wow! This is awesome. I love the art, both forma of it
. I never knew you could make such wonderful art . And the poem itself. Amazing!
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WOW!
I am awestruck!!
This picture is breathtaking to say the least!
Thank you so much for sharing it with me and everyone
else on AP
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KOOLIO!
Great PIC & POEM! Thank you for sharing
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good
Wow Bro...awesome.I used it for wallpaper and I like it a lot.I just put it there It is very peaceful and I love the saying you have with it
Kari
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