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Saturated Waters

It's all so easy,
so simple,
who could find it hard? Only an idiot could.

Stay on top and float away,
seas saturated with salt,
so saturated not a thing could live under it.
The weight pushing down, harder and harder as you go,
accelerating with speed, and accuracy for rock bottom.

You would wonder how one could sink in these waters.

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About me failing to do the simple work I've been getting
Written October 11th, 2006

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  • CtrlDelete
    October 11, 2006
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    The Dead Sea.


  • DreamGirl8390
    October 11, 2006
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    this is very good. this was a great subject to talk about. great job, keep it up.
    ~sara