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I'm Gone(a working title)

A hallowed mind .
A fragile heart .
A warrant for the arrest of my soul.
A splintered tear.
An irrational fear.
A bitter Lullaby of anger consumes me whole.

If I was made so strong, why am I so weak?
If love is so great, why does it fail me so?
Is this just a sick game or preparation for something more?
Why is it that you forsake me so?

I trip over my own confusing words.
I get lost in the moment of another life.
I find my escape thru the confusing lies I tell.
I have no one and that’s the way it stays.

Lost in a moment.
Found in a verse.
Left behind to die.
Right where I was.
Tall tales become my legend.
Short meanings become my call,.
Quick answers are good for none.
Slow conclusions save us all.

I don’t know where I’m going next,
But I’ll get their when I do.
I’ll be back in my own time,
Till then Ill be missing you.

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Written October 11th, 2006

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  • Loves wind
    October 11, 2006
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    beautimous...i loves it!