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Architectural Memorial





Architectural Memorial 



 

What dignified and stately rhyme,

What echo, in pace, of another time

Demands the subject of this oration,

The Milano Centrale Railway Station.

 

Escalator borne from the underground glooms

Of the Metropolitana, above you it looms.

No mere utility, this edifice vast

Is a monument to a particular past.

 

A tribute in concrete and stone to the power

Of the state in that strange pre World War II hour

When Il Duce played soap opera/costume drama

In a real life stage set and with real troops and armour.

 

It's no surprise, from this station, that things ran on time,

One can picture the costumes of the staff on the line.

From a horror film, here, the memory remains

Of a man who was good at playing with trains.




Author notes

One that rhymes! Probably not what Milton would have written, Mary, but what the hell... the subject rhymed.

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  • lonely and free
    November 11, 2006
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    I love the roundness of words in this.. it has a wondrful balance and fullness.... and such a fascinating subject. Intelligent, objective horror. K x


  • panegyric ink
    November 3, 2006
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    very imaginative! i really liked the way you've put such expressions into context and form!

  • luvdrkchocolate
    October 21, 2006
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    Wow. This is pretty good for a rhyming piece. It seemed very structured and well thought out. You had a very serious subject matter that dealt with real life and how it plays out in the day to day. I thought that was what made it most interesting for me. Because I like seeing different kinds of things. So I think that you have done a good job of expressing yourself.

  • Revwilliamfoos
    October 16, 2006
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    intresting it would be somthing to go back to the day when trains were a thing of beauty with drapes and fine linnen unlike today when we see nasty things scrawled all over it and blah blah i realy enjoyed this write keep doing well
    love the papa