Gossamer fairies fly in golden dust
Unicorns carry a Prince where they must
Rainbows hold treasures in bright color pots
Clouds are mystical, there are lots
Leprechauns dress in shades of green
They hide beneath clovers and can't be seen
Tooth fairy's flutter over our beds
Sleeping children dream, treasures in heads
Dragons all colors, on ledges they play
Knights in armor look for them to slay
Castles with towers reach up to the sky
Where jilted Princess's go to cry
Wizards use toads to cast a spell
Witches in black peer in pots and see hell
Jack Frost traces patterns on windows and glass
By roadsides in gardens see gargoyles made of brass
Fantasy holds us, we like to take chances
Our heads they do spin our mind in trances~
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Written April 28th, 2003
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This is so very cool. I love the fansty you have created and named so many so very well.
Jack Frost traces patterns on windows and glass
By roadsides in gardens see gargoyles made of brass
Fantasy holds us, we like to take chances
Our heads they do spin our mind in trances~
I love these lines it great way of putting it. I think Jack Frost is having alot of fun here. His icy fingerprints are all over. I can not wait for sweet spring to come. I really enjoy reading your work. It is truly a work of art. -
fantastic
Wonderful Susan, I love fantasy and you have painted a masterpiece for me Truly enchanting -
Excellent
Susan...Enjoyed this whimiscal poem. So light, so delightfully rhymed. All your images would please any child or any adult...for that matter. You are truly a gifted poet who writes with the soul of innocence; and yet you have such blessed insight into the human heart. ***Ivy Rose -
hehehe, i really like this one. brought a smile to my face this morning and made me giggle (not an easy task first thing in the morning) wonderful write. blessed be
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ohh wonderfully written Susan...as always!!! you give your readers so much to envision in your writes...I don't think we could ever outgrow our love for knights, princesses, and magical beings... an absolutely splendid and enjoyable write!!!
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A Veritable smorgasbord of fantastical imagery!!!Although----- I myself prefer the reference to white and healing witches as to witches with Black pots and associated with hell........... but , hey - - - it fit with the stereo typical imagery!!!! Good one, I like it, I like it!!!!
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Another very good write that you have here. I enjoyed reading it and all the comments too. I will be back soon.
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I like this one. It brings me back to the fairy tales of my childhood. One memory I have in particular though, funny as it sounds, is watching the March of the Wooden Soldiers with Laurel and Hardy. LOL...don't know why this poem conjurs up pictures of that but it does. A very good write. Thanks! - SG
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Excellent! Very nicely done!
Really enjoyed this, Sis! Wonderful images to stimulate our imagination! Loved the rhyme and the flow!
Love You!
< 3 Maureen
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awesome!!
this is my type of poem, very mystical and imaginitive!!I have to agree with everybody else who commented,it's very creative and I can imagine all of the pictures floating in my head hehe.. i remember my teacher always told me "Show me, Don't Tell Me". Seems like you got all that planned out, already haha.Fairies are the best, so prettyful! =) well, just wanted to tell you that this poem is awesome.
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A wonderful piece of work here, enjoyed the facination of this fantasy, thanks so much for sharing this!
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AWSOME!
Heya! Nice to see your works again, I'd lost myself in homework again!
This is such a cool write! It's like a dream world, and you've taken us there! Such great descriptions too! -
This is my kind of poem. Hehe. I love Fantasy...Dragons and fairies fascinate me. Haha. Great job Susan. Another masterpiece.
With Love,
Jey -
Very nice Susan
Love all of it... but like these two lines most"
Jack Frost traces patterns on windows and glass
By roadsides in gardens see gargoyles made of brass
so cool love all the images you reminded me of from childhood
I still love them! .."im just a big kid still"
Nice one!..enjoyed it most sincerely... Great job!
Love & Hugs ~Mina
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That's a really good poem, thanks for your comment on mine. I love the way you really paint a picture here, and bring back all of my childhood images of toothfaries and unicorns. You are a great poet, keep writing and come visit some of my other stuff! :-) I love comments, it makes the poem seem new again. Loved this one!! Bye!
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What a treasure you have written here, Susan. I read it to my son and he said "WOW" LOL... but you could see the wheels in his head were trying to imagine all the playful pictures you have painted in this one piece.
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