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Eagle Wilderness..

 

I claim the skies they are all mine
the rivers, brooks and the pine.
Instinct, raging through my veins,
like droplets falling in heavy rains.

A yearning swells within my being,
an un-controlling type of seeing.
The need to catch to kill to eat,
to tear and rip into the meat.

Spotting quarry from half a mile,
I’ll have to use all of my guile.
Swooping low through snowy trees,
for this one prey I soon will seize.

A fresh new kill to fill my need,
as talons pierce, he starts to bleed.
A heightened sense of survival,
this little mouse, a trifling rival.

Air currents belonging to the sky,
blowing beneath my wings, “I fly”
Lifting me to greater heights,
as I ascend into the nights.

Alert to all the forest sounds,
observant of my hunting grounds.
Protective of my eaglets nest,
under my wings, amidst my breast.

The echoes on the howling winds,
reminds me of my feathered friends.
An eagle’s aviary, patrolling skies,
lost in clouds a grand disguise.

The fight for freedom has its cost,
many have tried and many have lost.
But still the scent is fresh at hand,
across the vastness of this land.

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Written October 11th, 2006

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  • My Solitude
    April 4, 2007

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    Awesome

    This is such an awesome work. I might as well call it a masterpiece! What a marvelous insight on the eagle's mind!
    "A yearning swells within my being,
    an un-controlling type of seeing."
    U've expressed your thoughts very well. And i did like the way it ends. The poem carries a wonderful message after all. Great write on the Eagle by a Dove.

    P.S. U've just been hood-winked by the Poetic Bandits Group.


    • FifthDove
      April 5, 2007
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      Thank you
      I am overwelmed as well as overjoyedDove*


  • FifthDove
    November 12, 2006
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    I thank you ever so much for the applaud and comment dear poetess


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 12, 2006
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    :f BRAVO :f

    WOW! You do have the gift of a true poet!! This piece is incredible, and shows your
    senstivity for nature and all things beautiful, powerful, truthful and alive!!! BRAVO
    Edited on Nov 12, 3:21 p.m. because ''.


  • queen Moderators member
    October 14, 2006
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    Seeing an eagle is always a spiritual feeling. My animal is a Hawk, everywhere i have ever been i have seen one


  • maa gold member
    October 14, 2006
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    dearest cindy,
    indeed, this is an exquisit poem in every way.
    although I will have to tell the little mouse who lives in my living room to hide from the fangs of your poetic eagle ... ...
    your poem is perfection manifest.
    good luck,
    maa


  • wakingdevil
    October 13, 2006
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    I should thank you for providing an enjoyable read amidst such terrible entries!


  • FifthDove
    October 13, 2006
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    Thank you very much, I am happy you enjoyed this piece

  • wakingdevil
    October 13, 2006
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    One of the best in the round!I'm glad you entered this marvellous piece.You wrote this wonderfully well with great understanding.Thanks for entering and best of luck


  • FifthDove
    October 12, 2006
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    DK, you are priceless, I think I'll keep you


  • FifthDove
    October 12, 2006
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    Thank you very much for the read , comment and applaus


  • ma belle
    October 12, 2006
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    I adore the eagle, mainly for its spiritual implications in the scriptures. You did a fantastic job, dear Shalott sister. All my best to you in the contest and thank you for visiting my piece. ♥ Belle


  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    October 12, 2006
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    Excellent vision and personification! I truly felt the raptor soul of this poem! excellent!! Loved it!
    xxoo
    dk


  • FifthDove
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you for your comment and applaud, I appreciate it very much and I am glad you enjoyed the read Cindy


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    This is beautiful Dove, loved it. great rhythm and flow and the rhyme is wonderful. Loved the perspective! Good luck in the contest Bunny

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