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A Perfect Chorus; Nine Muses

 


Upon the conquering of an enemy, the Warrior's Creed,
Dictates the ravishing of the women to beget Victor's seed.

A woman's nature easily submits, contented with the deed.

Offspring, more likely to flourish, cast by a stronger breed.


'Twould seem this is as true of Gods as it is of simple Man.

For The Olympian begot The Muses upon a vanquished Titan.

Zeus desired a Divine Chorus to honor his heroism, his elan.

He cannily set out to produce perfect vessels to suite his plan.

Blood of two supreme breeds the perfect chorus would include.

For nine days and nights they lay enmeshed in an erotic interlude.


The Titan Goddess Of Remembrance Mnemosyne he did choose.

From this coupling came nine daughters, each one a Divine Muse.


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In all of artistry and aesthetics, we nine noble Muses do stand alone.

Of the most stellar parentage, from both an Olympian and Titan, grown.

Violet-eyed, we do delight in feasting and take much pleasure from song.
At Mount Helicon, Apollo, Hypnos, The Charities and Peace always along.


In infancy we did dine, yea we sipped upon Remembrance's breast.

Sired by the most Divine, Our Father holds dominion o'er all the rest.

Aesthetically dazzling, brilliant and mesmeric, the very Sun outshone.

Nay, not even a choir of Sirens can produce the perfection of our tones.


We move with unsurpassed fluidity, perfect poetic grace.

We bestow the very light of inspiration upon each artist's face.

Yea, we nine sublime daughters of Mnemosyne and Zeus,

Are the source from which all creative artistry is loosed.


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I am called Calliope though I prefer Calliopeia given the choice.

Mine are Philosophy, and Eloquence, I am called "The Fair-Voiced"


I am Clio "The Proclaimer" mine are Scholarship, and History.

Tales and truths lost to the sands of time are, to me, no mystery.

I am Melpomene "The Songstress" in my joyous tunes, all bask.

Yet also a dichotomy, for I hold sway o'er the Tragic Mask.

I am Euterpe, Patroness of Music, for my unsurpassed double flute.

Called "The Giver of Pleasure" yet I have refused many a lover's suit.


I am Erato "The Lovely" of Love Poetry and Mimicry, Romance and Desire.
Seductive allure flows from my lute, known for the erotic pleasures I inspire.


I am Terpsichore "The Whirler" O'er Drama, Dance, my Harp and Plectrum.

Mother of the Sirens, fiery nature, hair of red, most vivid color in the spectrum.


I am Urania, mine are astrology, and astronomy, I hold dominion o'er the sky.

I am called "The Heavenly" you should have no difficulty discerning why.


I am Thalia "The Flourishing" o'er Comedy, Parody; and Pastoral.

I am a favorite of clowns, jesters, and others who are abnormal.


I am Polyhymnia, I am also known as "She of many Hymns"

O'er the Sublime, and the Sacred, my demeanor, very prim.


The World was Gifted when Zeus felt our lack, and did fret it.

Never challenge or disrespect us, or forsooth you shall regret it.

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You see, we are the source of music, song, poetry, all the arts.

We are proud of accomplished mortals, but intolerant of upstarts.

Why is there ever and always some silly soul, vanity prone,

So impressed with their talent thinking it surpasses our own.

How can one pour out more wine than a container holds?

We are the vessel from which all artistry flows, weak or bold.

So it is impossible to be endowed with greater talent than we.

As each time we have been challenged we allowed the fool to see.

Demodocus, Thamyris, The Pierides all suffer loss upon the regretful lists.

Our pain is The Sirens, daughters and nieces, who now languish in the mists.

We deprived them of their lovely feathers for their arrogance  we brought them down.
Though gracious to spare eyes and voices, their feathers adorn each Muse crown.

Do not suppose we have no softness in our hearts, that would be a grave mistake.

Our chosen ones have never felt such love before, assured a vast fortune to make.

Our peers with whom we dally pleasurably, know our vast love for them.

For one creature, we would lay down our lives to prevent  his requiem.

Tis Pegasus who inspires, for unsurpassed beauty, purity of spirit in him resides

Given into our care when he was newborn, deep in we Muses'  hearts he abides.



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We are ever so willing to lend our skills, our knowledge, our grace,

To mortals who hold our favors dear, as you see here properly placed.

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THUS DO I PETITION THE NINE MUSES OF MOUNTS OLYMPUS AND HELICON

AS THEIR BEAUTY, KINDNESS, SKILL, KNOWLEDGE AND GRACE I DO DWELL UPON.


Oh Calliopeia, lend eloquence to my tongue.

Mastery o'er words grandiose and far flung.

Sweet Clio my Muse, lend me scrolls for my yearning.

Salt my mind with thy wisdom, open me to thy learning.

Melpomene grant me perseverance to joyously sing.

Yea even in the face of all tragedies that life may bring.

Euterpe give me diligence to master the instruments I use.

Possess me, invade me, dwell in my poor spirit my Muse.

Erato so lovely please lend me thy grace and allure.

Not fleeting or vaguely but strong, for years to endure.

Terpsichore thy endurance thy frenetic speed, thy pace.

Energize me, empower me to whirl at the head of the race.

Urania so Heavenly advise me in Universal endeavors.

Forearm me for all my encounters, strategically clever.

Thalia allow me the pleasure of laughter and the power of it.

May thy Flourishing nature endow me with thy gift of wit.

Polyhymnia please inspire my homage to the Sacred, the Sublime.

To bestow the gifts of eternity upon me through this and all time.

Nine Sublime Deities, Thou Art Inspiration, the very polarity of abhorrence.

My Muses please endow me with your skills for many a graceful performance.





Author notes

In researching the division of dominion among the nine, I found some contradictions. I have depicted the attributes as they are most often described.
Written October 11th, 2006

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  • dewfall
    October 28, 2006
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    congratulations.

    this i think wins the bronze at this stage... well treated are these muses... i have written before on this site that i would like to live life with the muse's mouth prest close to my ear.


  • Allure of a Rose
    October 16, 2006
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    Breathtakingly Beautiful

    My, my, what may I say worthy of being displayed on this page? This flowed so easily throughout the entire length. On that subject, it is rather lengthy, however, I had your voice to accompany me and I drifted along gleefully. One thing I would criticize you on, at the end you address each of the nine, rules of grammar say when addressing someone you must set off their names with commas. Back to it.... My love, my love, does heaven taste sweeter? Yes, I feel all drama-ish errr dramatic today but this poem is beautiful.

    "We are ever so willing to lend our skills, our knowledge, our grace,

    To mortals who hold our favors dear, as you see here properly placed"

    These lines fit ever so perfectly.

    I admire you so greatly, my dear, for tackling something like this, and moreso for exceeding my highest standards for brilliance.


    && Kisses of fire
    With wishes of desire
    Take these, escape the mire

    -Allura


  • grannyeri gold member
    October 16, 2006
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    What a lot of work you have done to research all this and collect the information; then write it in a poem form as well. Very impressive, educational and interesting too.


  • white stone
    October 15, 2006
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    MMmmm...aesthetics. Here's my vein and a sparkling needle, pierce
    and give me solace in beauty. Ancient wisdom illuminated. Outstanding piece of work. True to classical style. Wake that myth up and remind us of majic!


  • IndividualEleven
    October 15, 2006
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    fantastic

    i felt like i was in another place and time, but strange enough i felt like i belonged there, you did great on this piece, extrodinary work and use of names and words.


  • RealEyezRealize
    October 15, 2006
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    BRAVO ENCORE

    Wow that was.....incredible, I had to pull the dictionary out for some of those words, this is an AMAAAAAAAAAAAZING piece, and I admire your patience in writing such a beautiful ongoing poem, breathtaking is another word to descibe this.... some people pay money to read this kind of stuff so I must say thank you for sharing it here, an inspiration you are...WRITE ON ROCK ON READ ON!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • OceanicEyes
    October 14, 2006
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    Unmatched. Grade: A++

    I don't know what to say really.
    What superlatives can I use to describe how perfect and unmatched this poem is. Compare it to Shakespeare and you may not attain such perfection, but honestly, you are right below him my dear...seriously.
    This poem is why I am a fan, and now my eyes are no longer blue...
    THEY ARE GREEEN!!!
    You have a PERFECT voice for this poem and you carried eloqeuence, seduction, and whimsy all in the same voice...I am deeply, DEEEPLY impressed with you and with this piece. I listened to the audio three times I think, and each time my love for this kept growing, it is AWSOME in every way imaginable...and NO I'm not making up for not keeping track of your works lol, I really mean it. This surpasses all your other poems, I am sorry, but it really is the best that I have read from you so far...well, ERRR it's so hard because when you attack a poem, dark, beautiful, erotic, you do it with such style and perfection that it really does seem like the best each time. You always make me step back and say...damn.
    If you couldn't tell by now I dearly loved this, and will try and give my remaining applauses to it, but I suck at trying to applaud something more than once lol, if it doesnt take just remember that the INTENT was there!!
    I think I have applauded on other poem more than once on this site, so I guess you can take that as a compliment

    WOW FUCKING WOW!!!


  • Theater Of Dreams
    October 14, 2006
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    Outstanding, wonderful!

    Thanks DK, for the invite. Of course I am not disappointed- it is superb, and the narration is delightful. The writing reminds me of Neil Peart of Rush, specifically from "A Farewell To Kings" and "Hemispheres", where the band touched on the balance of the universe and the Mythological Gods.

    Truly gifted, you have created a masterpiece, and allowed it to be humanized and so touching.

    Truly astonishing.

    -James.


  • intanglio2ring
    October 14, 2006
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    Dear DK akaLunaticSerene,
    May your efforts not go unrewarded!
    As per your character you have done an excellent and thorough entry that demands a look into the elloquence.
    Wonderful!
    Tang


  • maa gold member
    October 14, 2006
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    dearest diana, (also a goddess, if I remember well )
    this is truly a very well elaborated and researched piece you have written here. very inspired and very inspiring. I enjoyed the last part very much, which sounded like a prayer or an invocation, and made your poem even more special. good luck.

  • Rudolf
    October 14, 2006
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    i can't comment because in order to say something meaningful i need to read it,theres alot to read here ........and i don't have time ,...however, i'll leave you an applaud and be on my way ,rudolf


  • Mhyko
    October 14, 2006
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    You have managed to use mythology in the most beautiful and intricate manner...the stanzas were very well written and the word choice and the way you presented the lines was amazing. This is a beautiful if not extarvagant depiction of the Nine Muses, thank you for featuring it, otherwise i would never have stumbled upon it. Keep the light up...Applaud and a bookmark!


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    October 14, 2006
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    This is a beautiful piece. Greek mythology was always my favorite. So which one is the muse for prose? I guess my muse's name is Erato for she through God has blessed me with a poetry voice.


  • Grey Mouser
    October 13, 2006
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    terrific

    You are simply amazing Lady. Wonderfully versed. So very well orated, the audio just adds that great touch to this masterful work you have presented here. A fantastic depiction of the muses in all their glory and anything with my favorite Pegasus is going to be a winner in my book.
    Love everything about this write Lady. Best wishes in this contest.

    Mouser


  • PerVirtuous
    October 13, 2006
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    Came back for seconds!

    OK. Checked out the audio. Hmmmm. Call me. Let's chat. This was the 800 pound gorilla I have been expecting from you. I am awed. Odd, too.

    This passage about me was fun...

    "...Why is there ever and always some silly soul, vanity prone,

    So impressed with their talent thinking it surpasses our own..."

    Sorry, ladies, but get with the times! Still running around with 3500 year old names and such, not very "with it". But, I'll take the slap like a big boy.


  • ma belle
    October 13, 2006
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    Dearest Shalott sister, this theatre of the muses with presentation was simply exquisite. I loved the audio feature as I followed along with the words--meter and rhythm was truly magical and your oratory skills simply divine. Thank you for sharing this treasure from your library. I am humbled. ♥ Belle


  • FifthDove
    October 13, 2006
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    Wow, I am speechless... Wow!!!!


  • kirbysman Moderators member
    October 13, 2006
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    I think you've outdone yourself with this one, Madame DK. This is very impressive, and listening to you read it enhances the enjoyment by many times over doing it myself. So extensive and thorough, it's fabulous. Much applause for this one.

    Paul


  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    October 13, 2006
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    Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you decided to listen to the sound file, I really loved doing that, it felt like college days when I played Electra! lol! Thanks again! Yea! I'm pretty pleased with this piece, It was a big undertaking, but lots of fun to transport to another age, eh?
    Your the best Bunny!
    xxoo
    DK

  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    October 13, 2006
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    Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you decided to listen to the sound file, I really loved doing that, it felt like college days when I played Electra! lol! Thanks again! Yea! I'm pretty pleased with this piece, It was a big undertaking, but lots of fun to transport to another age, eh?
    Your the best Bunny!
    xxoo
    DK


  • darkspiritonline
    October 13, 2006
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    heh...link with a certain project of mine too

    Wow....I'm not sure how I stumbled upon this....my AP page just went straight to this..lol....but I'm glad it did.....this is a really great poem...It's beautiful and...well I'm struggling to think of something to describe how much I enjoyed reading each segment...but I loved it...and well the two lines that stood out to me have already been mentioned lol.

    Why is there ever and always some silly soul, vanity prone,

    So impressed with their talent thinking it surpasses our own.

    But another line(s) I liked were:

    So it is impossible to be endowed with greater talent than we.

    As each time we have been challenged we allowed the fool to see.

    ~DSO~

    P.S.~ I'll still comment on your guest book if you want... ^_^ But I didn't click the feature box....so and well that was the point wasn't it????
    Edited on Oct 13, 12:15 because 'need a question answered. lol'.


  • raw love
    October 13, 2006
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    well. you wanted a comment. so right of the bat, i really don't dig the whole god and goddess thing so yeah. your poem had pretty nice flow and evrything though so.
    keep writing
    -deep one


  • Previn
    October 13, 2006
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    Great Job!

    Dammit! You must be a disciple of history or mythology, you seem more than well versed with Greek mythology.
    Your work is rich in detail and I must say it takes a Herculean effort to depict such a wealth of mythology in poetic form while remaining true to the authors vision and still managing to capture the readers attention. I know I'm not capable of such a disciplined approach, so hats off to to you!
    Take care and be well!
    Previn


  • purple wings
    October 13, 2006
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    marvalous write,it shone so bright it almost un rooted my kite,aluminated the night,gave me an awefully awe full fright i had to hold my elderberrys tight.brilliantly done.


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    October 13, 2006
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    Wow, beautiful DK loved, I especially liked the sound track, made it all seem so very professional and so wonderfully flowing. great work hun,

  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    October 13, 2006
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    Teee Heeee Heeee! yeah, huh! Thanks for looking at it for me! I really felt like the last segment was important to add!
    xxoo
    DK


  • Frodofan silver member
    October 13, 2006
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    Wow, very long, but I loved the way the different sections went together. I liked the part about singing in a fairer tune than sirens, but I think my favorite part was this couplet,

    "Why is there ever and always some silly soul, vanity prone,
    So impressed with their talent thinking it surpasses our own." <It reminded me of some people. :rofl:

    Well done and good luck!


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    October 12, 2006
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    Gorgeous Shalott sister, wonderful job from start to finish, I was captivated! Bunny

  • ma belle
    October 12, 2006
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    This is absolutely amazing, dear Shalott sister. You truly outdid yourself--a sheer wealth of information. Bravo!

  • FifthDove
    October 11, 2006
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    Gorgeous And I learned some new things from the read that I didn’t know before. What a wonderful write you have penned. Best wishes to you in all you do Cindy

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