I've given you time
I've given you care
Why is it not enough for you to give me back
The love... the love that I've been longing for
Since the day... the day when I realize
that I am longing for someone like you
Oh... teach me how to let you go
Even though my tears run down and falling
Co'z my heart keeps on telling me
that the love is not for you and me
teach me how, teach me how
to let you go
I give you my life
I give you myself
How am I going to ease the pain inside
Co'z I... I never realize that I will be
Standing here alone... hoping that someday
I will say that I'm yours and you're mine
You've been so different when the first we met
You've changed a lot and nowhere to find out
I am not facing the one that I adore
It's better to part ways and hurt myself
than to hurt you...
Author notes
Why do people really have difficulties in letting go? Although, there are people saying they are not affected... deep inside they are very hurt...
Written October 11th, 2006
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Comments
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"It's better to part ways and hurt myself
than to hurt you..." Very strong closing statement.
-Thank you for your entry, Angi Terese -
Great rhyme scheme, nice construction and flow. Interesting use of vocabulary and artistic method. Thanks much for the great read.
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