Your lips,
honey sweet
so divine.
A taste of paradise
upon your heated flesh.
Let me lap my way
to Elysium.
You, the vessel of my journey.
Sultry,
a painted pout,
searching your temple of desire.
Allow me, so that I may enter,
giving you the pleasure you seek.
Your body,
a shrine to primordial lust,
devoured and entombed
within the walls of ecstasy.
My gates await you,
always.
To cross the threshold
of exaltation.
A crescendo of orgasmic
hunger...
to be sated by
the serpent of passion.
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Written October 11th, 2006
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Thank you for making a comment, I really appreciate it.
Storm -
a wonderful sensual write your words just seem to flow so easily,,,blessings...Fire Storm
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Thank you for the comment, much appreciated.
Storm -
So very beautiful and written to awesome perfection.....enjoyed what you did with this piece.....smiles, Terry
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Alright sweetheart, and just what are we thinking, hmmmm? Now take those thoughts, double it, and I'll say good morning, the day has just begun!!
Storm -
Very nice write baby. Has me thinking!
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Thanks hun, appreciate it.
Storm -
Ooooh! Now that's HOT!
Yikes. And it's quite warm for me as we speak. I so need a cold shower now!
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Thank you Ktulu, appreciate it.
Storm -
WOW...this is very sensual and almost seductive...I loved it. Thank you for sharing this with us.
*Ktulu Blackwolfe* -
Thank you very much for the comments, most appreciated.
Storm -
Thank you sweet Tes. Glad you enjoyed this and appreciate your comments hun.
Storm -
Storm...
Sis...Once again you have blown me away hun...Your writing is just magnificent and yout imagery you used to get us hot was perfect...You captured my attention from the first line and kept it there till the very last word...
Wonderfully done honey...
Capture my heart with your words...
Love ya
Tes
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Thanks sweetie. And Kari, you have many beautiful writes. Appreciate your comments.
Storm -
sweet
wow sis...this was very wonderful...I soooo wish I could write like u lol...awesome job hun
Lovely background
Kari
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