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A Taste of Paradise

Your lips,
honey sweet
so divine.
A taste of paradise
upon your heated flesh.

Let me lap my way
to Elysium.
You, the vessel of my journey.

Sultry,
a painted pout,
searching your temple of desire.
Allow me, so that I may enter,
giving you the pleasure you seek.

Your body,
a shrine to primordial lust,
devoured and entombed
within the walls of ecstasy.

My gates await you,
always.

To cross the threshold
of exaltation.
A crescendo of orgasmic
hunger...
to be sated by
the serpent of passion.

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Written October 11th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 19, 2006
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    Thank you for making a comment, I really appreciate it.

    Storm

  • Fire Storm
    October 19, 2006
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    a wonderful sensual write your words just seem to flow so easily,,,blessings...Fire Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 14, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment, much appreciated.

    Storm

  • BlessedAngel
    October 14, 2006
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    So very beautiful and written to awesome perfection.....enjoyed what you did with this piece.....smiles, Terry

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 12, 2006
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    Alright sweetheart, and just what are we thinking, hmmmm? Now take those thoughts, double it, and I'll say good morning, the day has just begun!!

    Storm
  • Trackrules
    October 12, 2006
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    Very nice write baby. Has me thinking!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thanks hun, appreciate it.

    Storm

  • goddesskevauna
    October 11, 2006
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    Ooooh! Now that's HOT! Yikes. And it's quite warm for me as we speak. I so need a cold shower now!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you Ktulu, appreciate it.

    Storm

  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    October 11, 2006
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    WOW...this is very sensual and almost seductive...I loved it. Thank you for sharing this with us.

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you very much for the comments, most appreciated.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you sweet Tes. Glad you enjoyed this and appreciate your comments hun.


    Storm

  • Angels Delight
    October 11, 2006
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    Storm...

    Sis...Once again you have blown me away hun...Your writing is just magnificent and yout imagery you used to get us hot was perfect...You captured my attention from the first line and kept it there till the very last word...

    Wonderfully done honey...

    Capture my heart with your words...
    Love ya
    Tes

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thanks sweetie. And Kari, you have many beautiful writes. Appreciate your comments.

    Storm

  • Hekate gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    sweet

    wow sis...this was very wonderful...I soooo wish I could write like u lol...awesome job hun Lovely background

    Kari
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