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Broken Sparrow: For Sylvia Plath

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Sylvia may have reconsidered,
had she known the recalcitrant martyrdom
she'd unwittingly inspired -


she abhored such blatant attentions
focused upon her being -


she detested whining and simpering fools,
although she was not unaware of
or immune to their inevitable purchases
of breath.


She'd thought she was ending the farce,
not composing yet another one
more legendary
than her own stark symphony -


her misery did not require
attendance
or adulation
in order to thrive.


Yet, who's to say
what might have been,
given half a chance
beyond demise?


The shadows invariably give way
to sunlight,
if only briefly.


There is no Beauty in a bitter end,
no Truth that remains
untainted by gossip and speculation.


No one really understood
her twisted dreams
or clarity of vision,
least of all, herself;


she merely danced.


There may have been an epiphany
upon an endless day,
come some infinite night -

 

we'll never know for sure.


The grave ultimately silences
even the best of us;

there is no song bursting forth
from this broken sparrow.




 

Sylvia Plath at Smith

From Sylvia Plath's journal, Smith College, April 27, 1953
 
(from the Smith College link)
 
 

 

 


 


 

Author notes




Sylvia Plath (1932 ~ 1963)

She published her first poem when she was only eight...


Inspired by A Prophet of 3

Thanks, H.L.


http://www.poemhunter.com/sylvia-plath/poet-6642/

http://www.oldpoetry.com/oauthor/show/Sylvia_Plath



"Broken Arrow: for Sylvia Plath"
 
 
"The Forsaken: Inspired by Sylvia Plath"
 
 
"Infinitesimal: Inspired by Sylvia Plath"
 
 
"Bouquet: for Sylvia Plath"
 
 
"Miss Sylvia Sexton's Sonata"
(inspired by Sylvia Plath and Anne Sexton)
 
 
"For Anne, Who Swallowed Loveliness"
(inspired by Anne Sexton)
 
 
"The Mourning After: Inspired by Anne Sexton"
 
 
I've also posted several columns:

"Pictures of Sylvia Plath and links for her readings"

 

http://allpoetry.com/column/2356363

 

"The Mourning After: Inspired by Anne Sexton"

 

http://allpoetry.com/column/2356359

 
 
All of the aforementioned poems are on the "Inspired by Famous People" list (link below); please see the columns on my author's page for information about Sylvia Plath, Anne Sexton, Emily Dickinson, Edna St. Vincent Millay and others.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • lovlilmystery
    November 13

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    This is the first time, I have heard of this poetess. But I will do a little research and read some of her poetry. This is a great poem, to memorialize quite possibly a great author. Thank you, for entering the contest. Take care and have a great day.

    Sandi


    • Night Hope gold member
      November 18
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      Thank you for hosting, Sandi. Sylvia Plath is quite famous, actually - as well as being infamous for committing suicide at a relatively young age, unfortunately - which is what originally prompted me to write this poem. I've done several columns on her and her work, and one in particular has many links with her words and other research information, including YouTube links of her reading her own poetry, should you care to peruse further. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Be well, Poet.

  • aychellus gold member
    November 1

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    her essence is captured well here (ted hughes has a lot to answer for) for his part in taking such a sublime talent far too soon great write!!


    • Night Hope gold member
      November 1
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      Thank you very much. I grew up between two brothers, so I can easily see life from both sides of the mirror. I penned one for Ted, as well, which I am sure her devotees may not look so kindly upon...but there are always two sides to every story, and then there's the truth of it.

      "In Defense of Ted Hughes"

      http://allpoetry.com/poem/3085750


  • Kathraina silver member
    October 28

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    Wow! Very intriguing piece you've penned here. I love the imagery, it unfolds very vividly in my mind's eye, and the flow is fantastic!


    bravo and thank you for entering



    ♥ kate


  • JinSays gold member
    August 27
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    PS- and I stole the image of her journal page thank you


  • JinSays gold member
    August 27

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    I've read this before. I know I have-but I was in a different place than I am now.
    Wanda, you're truly a beautiful person, your admiration is astounding. I've learned so much from you...thank you love.


    • Night Hope gold member
      August 27
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      Thank you kindly, M'am. I'm glad my thirst for knowledge helps others quench theirs, as well. Click on my list, "Inspired by Famous People" for other pics, as well as the first Plath poem you read earlier. I'll send you a link for more.


  • Antebellum
    July 10
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    wonderful write.
    thanks so much for entering, best of luck.

  • This is a wonderful ode to Slyvia. I'm not too familiar with her work to be honest, it seems good. A lot of emotions and I liked the use of your vocab. It added more effect. Thanks for entering and good luck.

  • what a wonderful tribute to her I am not sure who she is exactly I have heard the name before however.

    The Positives:

    great poem a beautiful tribute you did her justice.

    Room For Improvement:
    Nothing I can see you did wonderful



    My Favorite Part:
    There is no Beauty in a bitter end,
    no Truth that remains
    untainted by gossip & speculation.



    No one really understood
    her twisted dreams
    or clarity of vision,
    least of all, herself;


    Very true and beautiful words.
    Overall:

    I give this an 9/10 you did great. I hope to see you in my future contests thanks so much for entering.

    ~*~Apathetic Poison~*~


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 26

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    This is really good, good luck in the contest. This is awsome. It was a pleasure to read.


  • just mercedes gold member
    September 15, 2008
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    You cut close to her with this, and your ever incisive pen. Well done.


  • EvilKate
    May 24, 2008

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    Yes. She is probably weeping and laughing in turn, at the absurdities of an ironic life.

    You have such a wonderfully insightful pen.




  • RadioPJ
    April 2, 2008

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    In all the sadness and uncertainities, the clamor and strivings, I wish more of this for more of us -- "The shadows invariably give way
    to sunlight..." If only she would, we would, believe in the perfect timing of all good things coming, bursting forth. Having the faith to stick to the dream, even though a sparrow or two might be broken, is the test of character, and of vision. If only she could have seen her way through the mysts of dark and dawn, she could have basked in that ever-shining sun.


  • katfair
    April 2, 2008

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    broken sparrow is a perfect metaphor, tribute for this poet and her flight and her demise, for her broken creative wings and dreams,
    perhaps this is one of the songs
    bursting forth however?

    those left with left
    overs
    to sing over her bones

    kat

  • Rossetti
    August 7, 2007

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    This is terrific, Wanda. You have captured so much about Sylvia and the adulation she received after her death. The irony is that had Ted hughes not published her complete works after she died, she may have remained a minor poet.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 15, 2007

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    LOVE IT! i must say when i first read the title i was like o my i am not going to be impress thanks for the slap in my rude mouth cause you impressed your truly i am hard to impress this was very poetic very well penned i cant stop admiring it ~ lady enthralling ~


  • Alexander Hine
    June 18, 2007

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    This made me cry. Just the one tear, but still. Truly beautiful, a celebration of Plath, a mourning of her despair and the world's dark obsessions. The last stanza is heartbreaking.
    K. F.


  • myriad-dark
    May 17, 2007

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    An fitting tribute to a gifted & tortured soul

    Wanda, I loved this... the imagery & poignancy captures the essence of her (Sylvia Plath) & co-incidently I wrote a lyrical piece on her called Sylvia Plath (profane grail)... go figure! she was an amazing & gifted, albeit tortured soul; but then aren't they all! I've always said the most gifted are the most twisted... but I digress, as usual... I thought your piece a very fitting tribute to her... cheers 'd' (david)


  • g r e y i s m
    February 2, 2007

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    I knew who wrote this as soon as I read it. Sorry. I know it is you! lol
    Anywho, I really like the perspective this comes from, and I think I agree as well. Honestly, this isn't terribly Plathian in style, but it's about her and it's nicely written, so I will accept it. I suppose I should write that on my contest... that pieces about her are allowed, regardless of style. It hadn't occured to me before.

    Thanks for your entry,

    Lea


  • astralshepherd gold member
    February 1, 2007

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    Brilliant!

    i think i like her because i have had so many similar emotive responses, outbursts and explosive decompressions of my mind and soul. As i have searched to find my truest self, she has been with me more than i would care to admit...to myself (or my therapist) I would have been cast into hell so many times by a simple word she would write...left there for long empty hopeless days...had it not been for the subtle fact that i posses two souls, one that dies tragically, the other that continually rescues and protects, heroically.. (it’s a complicated issue, trust me) ....but Syliva, i think, would have understood me...even if only from a distance. As an aside, Emily has been another literary soul mate (not that i could ever attain her ability) – yes i know, i am hopelessly lost…but she and i are from Massachusetts and it was (is) difficult to ignore the way she writes so elegantly, contrasts of truth and beauty, and i must confess, for the longest time, i felt she and i were set apart from each other by fate’s twist of time…if i have loved any other, besides my wife, it has been Emily. So i appreciate the way you have so carefully and skillfully expressed your respect for Slyvia…I know i could never have done as well. Blessings and best wishes, ~r.


  • Heart Sutra
    January 23, 2007
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    This is one of your best poems.


  • Ava Noire silver member
    January 22, 2007
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    love this.


  • Allyce May gold member
    November 29, 2006
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    This is a great tribute to Sylvia Plath. You have such a refreshing vocabulary and I like the fact that your poem was story like yet still poetic.

    Thank you for entering and good luck

    xAx

    • Night Hope gold member
      February 3, 2008
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      Hey, Allyce May. I didn't realize we'd "known" each other so long.


      • Allyce May gold member
        February 3, 2008

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        WHOA! Who'd have thought?! LOL! I always keep coming back to great poets somehow


    • Night Hope gold member
      November 29, 2006
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      Thank you for hosting & for your kind words...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • mjseattle silver member
    November 4, 2006
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    I love it when you write something like this. Your vision exists at 360 degrees. No matter which way you turn, no matter what falls within your insight: suddenly poetry. And so it is with this darkly wonderful poem. I know there was a time when Plath troubled you; she's a powerful force to be reckoned with. It's a difficult task to take a ride with her through the tunnel and come out unscathed. But for you, "when you go into the tunnel you take the light with you." This poem shows another side of your wondrous poetic capacities. ~Mark


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 30, 2006
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    Thank you for hosting & for your kind comments, Starry Night54...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • BurnBrandMemory
    October 29, 2006
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    Beuatiful! Terrific! Jaw Dropping, you are an amazing writter! You really have talent!


  • mjseattle silver member
    October 16, 2006
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    Earlier you asked me who were my favorite writers. My answer is Slyvia Plath and you.


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 14, 2006
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    Thank you, Sweetie...Hope all is smoothing out somewhat for you & yours, Nic...Love you, Woman... Vlindertjie


  • Nicolette gold member
    October 12, 2006
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    A very moving and beautiful reflection of one of the greatest poet's life...written with insight and a clear eye...understanding the essence of her life as a poet, a woman, a mother. Such a strong poem this is... I like the "clarity" of your pen and the almost fragile image of a "broken sparrow"...that image is so powerful in its fragility, Vlindertjie. Made me think of something Nizar Qabanni wrote about "crying like a sparrow". Wonderful poetry, my friend

    ~ Nicolette


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, anirishlulabye...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, Unprotected Heart...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Indeed, I write in various styles; there are many Poets on AP that do...It doesn't help if you get caught up in the same categories of expression; it's better to spread your wings...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, xRapunzelx...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, Tamara...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, Kari...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • SensualWhispers
    October 11, 2006
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    her misery did not require
    attendance
    or adulation
    in order to thrive.

    Yet, who's to say
    what might have been,
    given half a chance
    beyond demise?


    That was really deep. I like your style of poetry. Interesting poem.


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, Di...I'm pleased you enjoyed it, my Friend...I'm not particulary keen on her so much anymore, either...I've got too much experience in that respect...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Indeed, it is, Mother Angst...Thank you for reading & for your kind comments...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, SNL...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, Noreen...I'm pleased you enjoyed it, Lady...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, pixxiepoetess...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Your humanity could never wane, my Friend. You're a beautiful Soul, Rich. Wanda

  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you, Moon Girl. f Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, Terry...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • Unprotected Heart
    October 11, 2006
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    Good

    Hello,

    I dont think I've ever read a poem quite like this one before. Thats a good thing though. I enjoy seeing the different writing styles on this site! This is a deep and well worded poem!!!

    Take Care~


  • Onyx-Rose
    October 11, 2006
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    Wonderfully written. This is absolutly amazing, I see Slyvia so clearly in my mind and if I read it slow enough I can almost feel her. This is beautifully written. Keep up the great work.
    xrapunzelx


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thanks for asking, oce...I should have thought of that before...There are many, many things written by & about Sylvia...Here's a link to get you started...Be well, Poet... Wanda

    www.poemhunter.com/sylvia-plath/poet-6642/


  • Ladybug
    October 11, 2006
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    No one understood here twisted dreams
    or clarity of dreams
    least of all herself-

    what a remarkable statement for one you adore.

    Tamara


  • Kari gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    sweet

    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww auntie...how sweet and precious..this was beautiful...you've done wonderful...the best of luck to you in the contest

    Kari

  • ocerus
    October 11, 2006
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    I really know next to nothing about Sylvia Plath, Wanda. Could you hook me up with a link about her or something? That would be much appreciated! This is a sad and wistful poem about someone who obviously died waaaaay too young. I really want to know about her, so if you could please hook me up with the info - if you can - I'd really appreciate it. Thank you, Wanda! - oce


  • masterblaster gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    PS sorry I forgot this so catch,lol, it's been a hard day and am very tired, hugs


  • masterblaster gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Hi, she certainly was a strange and yet extrodinary person, I am not a great fan of Plath maybe because of the life she led and what she did, this is a lovely poem and very well written, all the best my friend yet another great write, hugs Di


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you, James...I'm glad you liked it, my Friend...& yeahhh, I've been delving into a lot of different areas lately...it's good for the Soul... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Comin' from you, that's high praise, indeed, Richard...'cause you gots more soul than anyone I know, my Friend...Love ya, Muddy... Wanderer


  • Theater Of Dreams
    October 11, 2006
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    Just amazing...

    Extraordinary Wanda. Unlike anything I have seen by you- I suppose because of your experience from the past. Quite moving, and I see the subjects life was very short of only 31 years.

    A riveting and emotional poem...impressive is an understatement.

    -James.

  • Mother Angst
    October 11, 2006
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    great

    isint this the bell jar lady? at any rate, this poem is wonderful; sad and filled with truths. the grave does silence all in the end...the good, bad, and everyone inbetween.


  • MuddyKing
    October 11, 2006
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    I hear Wanda, but I saw Sylvia
    and the broken life between the lines
    you got soul girl
    Peace and hugs
    Muddy


  • SomeoneNobodyLikes
    October 11, 2006
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    sylvia plath is basically my favorite poet.
    this gave me shivers and i almost cried...this piece was so beautifully written. the imagry was amazing and very deep.

    "No one really understood
    her twisted dreams
    or clarity of vision,
    least of all, herself;"

    i loved that stanza. i bookmarked this piece

    i absolutly agree with "pixxie" above.
    thank you for sharing your talent.
    take care and good luck in the contest!
    ♥ SomeoeNobodyLikes


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    October 11, 2006
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    A beautiful tribute. The image was so captivating and of course your words were total inspiration. Great job.
    Soulful Woman


  • pixxiepoetess
    October 11, 2006
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    What a beautiful image. It matches the poem wonderfully. I don't know what else to say about this poem besides it is marvelous. A fitting tribute to an inadvertant legend. Marvelous. --->pixxie<---


  • kaibab silver member
    October 11, 2006
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    There are echoes in unclaimed canyons
    far from ears of mass deception
    sounding in innocence without provocation
    ascending in song to elevate soul
    in less contempory canvas
    across my vanishing horizon.

    Your words are vessel
    my airship to inspiration
    in blessed wing to wax
    my waning humanity.


  • natari gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Some poets love her others abhor her.The reality is she makes the reader react.If we have any reaction then as a writer she made her point so to speak.This was lovely and i appreciated the preview when I went to my email.You always give me food for thought.Have a great day.
    Love ya Helen


  • October 11, 2006
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    Excellent

    This is a very beautifully written and powerful Poem . Keep up the great work Wanda and best of luck to you in the contest.

    Cheers
    Terry


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, Tia...I'm pleased you enjoyed it, Lady...Be well, Poet... Wanda

    P.S.
    I don't try to step into another's shoes. They'd never be able to wear 'em again. I gots big feets.


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thank you for your always thoughtful words, Tom. I took a class in college on Sylvia Plath's work; I was only 19 & still very much a small~town girl, even though I'd been on my own since I was 16. I became concerned when her darkness began to infiltrate my consciousness. I considered dropping out. I talked to a professor who was a mutual friend of the one teaching the class & told him of my chagrin. He said something to me that has remained in the forefront of my mind to this day (he said it in the late 1970's). He addressed my concerns & said, "The difference between you & Sylvia Plath is that you take the Light into the tunnel with you." God Bless Michael Heenan. He helped me retain what little sanity I had. I'm sorry about your crash, Tom. Glad ya made it through it, Poet. Wanda


  • soulfultia gold member
    October 11, 2006
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    Thought Provoking

    WOW, this is a deeeeep and expressive write. Stepping into the shoes per se of another to express feeling and insight. You have done quite a job with this and I can only say.... WOW! Great work, great work, Always enjoy reading your pens... a pleasure and always... Thought provoking writes I might add. ~Tia


  • tomisb
    October 11, 2006
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    Beautiful Plath eulogy.

    I have to laugh in a way, because I came back from the grave. I hit a car with a motorcycle. I was doing about seventy when it happened. I was a sophmore in college. Reed, where one of Sylvia Plath's best biographers taught. I came back a year and a half later and found I was legend. I listened to stories of things I had down that defied possiblity. All I could do is laugh and say that the truth is even worse.

    Plath was so sensitive. So tuned to such a fine perceptive light. She gifted us all by being alive and perhaps success was it own worse reward. Your poem captures so much of this and more. Wonderful. Love,Tom B.

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