I woke up this morning and found you in my arms
Cuddled in peaceful slumber, nestled in my warmth
I brushed your cheek lightly, and planted a kiss
You gave a serene smile in your dreamy bliss
I lay there beside you holding you tight
Recollecting the magic between us last night
And here you were now dreaming in peace
All caution and care thrown to the breeze
The sun rose slowly and peered through the window
His bright gaze flooding and playing on your pillow
Fearing he would rouse you, I raised my shoulder
Shielding him back from interrupting your slumber
You stirred a little and buried deeper into my chest
Your pillow tousled hair now looking its best
I was never happier ever than I was at that moment
Love filled my being to my heart’s content
I woke up this morning and found you nowhere
Not surprising at all, because you where never there
Clutched tightly in my arms, was only a pillow
And the sweet remains of a dream, now fading slow
Author notes
Written October 10th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Passion, love and truth by fungshuay24.
300 points, ended October 11, 2006, 11 entries
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This entire poem was gorgeous...I loved it! But the ending made me so sad, definitely caught my heart, because I've had the same dream.
nicely done dear poet!
"I woke up this morning and found you nowhere
Not surprising at all, because you where never there
Clutched tightly in my arms, was only a pillow
And the sweet remains of a dream, now fading slow"
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Awww I want steven to do that to me so much, it would be so soothing and comforting and the most beautiful feeling I've ever endured! Wonderful!
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Sucks to be you eh?
Nice write, very sweet and sad.
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Please read the rules better... it says "NO rhymes."
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Wonderfully expressed and written
Wow what a wonderful dream I have a lot of those too I enjoyed it so much I had to read it again. Thank you so much for entering it and good luck (Lisa)
"You stirred a little and buried deeper into my chest
Your pillow tousled hair now looking its best
I was never happier ever than I was at that moment
Love filled my being to my heart’s content
I woke up this morning and found you nowhere
Not surprising at all, because you where never there
Clutched tightly in my arms, was only a pillow
And the sweet remains of a dream, now fading slow"
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this one's for option 4
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touching
i love this poem. its so romantic and touching. keep writing because i love your poems! -
this is such a beautiful poem. thank you for entering this in my contest.
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