Let these arms surround you,
as wings of love.
To reach beyond
the realm of passion,
grasped within reality.
Sigh,
let your thoughts,
those thoughts,
be wisked away to heaven.
And smile for this night
has just begun.
A tender kiss,
as lips collide in heat,
smouldering the soul.
Building intensity...
desire.
Touch me with your body,
your mind.
I ask you,
make love to me;
love like there will be
no tomorrow.
Reach me to the shores of ecstasy,
smothered in your arms.
Let your desires become mine,
unified,
and shatter the barrier of our lust.
Wild and carefree,
devoured by primal passion,
to taste the glory of
our luxuria.
Play me, a raging inferno,
that can only be extinguished
by you.
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Written October 10th, 2006
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Thank you for the comments, most appreciated.
Storm -
a very sensual write full of imagery of desires of the heart and soul,also written with wonderful flowing words,,,blessings...Fire Storm
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Thanks sweetie. I appreciate your wonderful comments.
Storm -
What a waste that such total sensuality be in words alone.
Whoever wins your heart sweet lady is never going to want to leave it.
Just one word wrong (Intensity) ?
But who cares when the intensity of you shows throughout!
Beautiful as always. -
Thank you hun. Nice to know I can tantalize with a few words at least
Appreciate the comments.
Storm -
Wow this is beautiful. My so sexy and sensual friend. I reckon there are more than a few guys AND women wishing these words were directed to them. Great writing. Now, let me look at the entries to your contest to see how, um, twisted I can be!!
Jeannie
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Thanks sweetie, glad you like.
Storm -
Oh yea babe, this is hot. Steamy and sexy without laying it on the table. I love your use of words, leaving the mind floating. And I agree, I'm sure a lot of guys are wishing these words be directed at them.
love ya
Jay -
Thank you Ktulu, appteciate it.
Storm -
Well sweetie, they weren't written for anyone particular. Would you like claim to them? LOL
Thanks for the comments Ron, most appreciated.
Storm -
What a very steamy write, filled with great imagery, as if one could see this taking place. Thinking I may need a cold shower now...lol
*Ktulu Blackwolfe* -
I know for a fact im not the only guy now wishing these words were directed to him Good Job hun. ~Ron~
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Thank you sweet Kari, appreciate your comments and glad you enjoyed.
Storm -
sweet
hmmmmmmm wow this was wonderful sis..you've done a great job.Thanks for sharing hun.
Kari
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