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Running bath water, fragrances of lilacs
purple rose petals float on top of the
tub.
Inviting her in, slowly she begins to disrobe.
Letting it caress her skin and each of
her curves. Looking in the mirror,
she smiles. Knowing he is at the door
watching her.
Putting her long hair up, with a twist and
ties it in back. Teasingly touches the water.
bending slightly by the tub, before slowly
climbing in.
Sinking into the tub, allowing her body to
take in the heat, she slowly arches her leg
above her head. Softly she caresses it up and
down, then the other with warm lathers of
soap. Taking the washcloth,she slides it in
a swirling fashion around her nipples, knowing
they are getting hard just thinking about him
watching.
Twisting off the cap of bubbles, she slowly
takes out the wand and blows bubbles in to
the air. The fan, slowly disperses them to
the floor, a few float past him by the door.
she laughs.
Pouring herself a glass of champagne. She lies
her head back against the tub and whispers,
Come join me my love!"...
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Written October 10th, 2006
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You don't need to ask twice! I will be RIGHT THERE!
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nice color
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Such an exquistely expressed piece of very tasteful erotica that fills up the senses. I love purple, so that is why I clicked on this poem, and I'm glad that I did. It's really wonderful.
David
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This is so beautifully expressed Sie. A delightful piece of poetry with stunning imagery. I feel like i need what you describe in this illuring piece of wonderful poetry.
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a beautiful poem
a very seductive atmosphere here and very well written with skill and a gentle touch...PK
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Very relaxing and soothing, sensual and sexually enticing... Being watched is a hot thought...
Works well for me...
Well done...
Jeffro -
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Thank you for stopping by...this is one of my almost favorites...not quite!...lol,Glad you enjoyed it anyway
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BREATHTAKING
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL. TREMENDOUS WRITING. PERFECT IMAGERY. JUST BREATHTAKING
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Thank you for comementing. This is my favorite...shhh just don't tell anyone! Glad you liked it Wayne. ~Sie
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I loved this was beautifully written i can tell you can write. I just do it to hav something to do but this is beautiful. So comming from someone that cant write, i would speak for alot of people and i love it. (perfect)
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A true gentleman would NEVER let you pour your own champagne! lol A very enticing and inviting set of images- you paint so well with words. Even my best artwork doesn't convey the senses of scent and touch as easily as you have here. Very well done!
Sly -
excellent
Awww Sie: full of emotions and sexuality here. very sensual indeed. wow, can just smell the fragrance of the bubbles and feel the water so nice and relaxinfg. Wonderful, my dear friend. bautifully done, with class. wow. I liked this one.
jules.
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Wow, this was beautiful. Also seemed kind of teasing, but in a good way. lol.
The imagery in this was great. Keep up the great writes. -
Very beautiful writing. Smooth words giving a splendid picture.
Very good, Rick -
So playful are you in this piece. You're so bad... such a tease! I like it though, imagining a reality of this. I can almost feel the warmth of your beautiful smile... tempting!
Love,
Prince
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Wow!
No dream is this all you have to do is ask and I can make it happen LOL
I wish!
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This poem is so beautiful. I feel relaxed and aroused at the same time, how refreshing. Reading the poem then going down to comment I could've sworn that I had just seen a picture to go with it as well... one of the woman in the tub, I discovered you had done that with your words. Yes, I'm being completely honest, I really thought that. Though I started my night really early this morning and I'm a bit tipsy.. but damn, great imagery.
TaintedWishesAndBloodiedKisses
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Dear sister could you please tell me what it is you have for breakfast, for whatever it is it works
There is no stoping your brilliant imagination, you can take the scene of a bath time and turn it into a dream.
No detail left unturned to make the reader feel the warm of the water and the aroma of scented bubbles,and not forgeting those eyes watching,oooh errrr, naughty but exciting
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Lovey I am going on vacation for two weeks...Cyprus...
I look forward to catching up on ALL your postings as soon as I get back home.
Now I must go, my bath is ready...yep probably be in there for some time.
Much love
and big hugs
KEEP THAT MAGIC FLOWING.
Babs
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Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem! Glad you liked it. ~Sie
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very beautiful
beautifully written...
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