Many angels for me as friends,
pretty souls that light my day,
touch my life while it bends,
ease the hollowness with words they say...
pretty souls that light my day,
embrace my wonder of this crazy life,
ease the hollowness with words they say,
heal me like the one that would be my wife...
embrace my wonder of this crazy life,
a storm of emotion that sweeps me up,
heal me like the one that would be my wife,
drink from this hearts overflowing cup...
a storm of emotion that sweeps me up,
cleanses the ache enduring from before,
drink from this hearts overflowing cup,
slake my thirst in such a mystic rapport...
cleanses the ache enduring from before,
broken crying eyes and wings lift my thought,
slake my thirst in such a mystic rapport,
and make sure that it hasn't all been for naught...
broken crying eyes and wings lift my thought,
my terrific hearts that won't see me hurt,
and make sure that it hasn't all been for naught,
would rather have around as their flirt...
my terrific hearts that won't see me hurt,
touch my life while it bends,
would rather have around as their flirt,
many angels for me as friends.
Author notes
I want to thank all my angels, mentioned and unmentioned. You all really do hold a special place in my heart. Your uplifting words and thoughts help me to keep the faith!
Written October 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- SPIRITUAL, MYSTICAL, INSPIRATIONAL ~ PANTOUMS 2~ by maa.
333 points, ended October 23, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~~Touched By An Angel~~ by Sweetangelgrace.
450 points, ended March 1, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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idk why but this made me cry as tears flow know I embrace your spirit with love and laughter xxxx well done and many blessings always xxxxxxx
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omg! This is very nice and sweet...Its what i feel only i definitely dont have the vocabulary to express it as beautifully as you have. im so impressed! you have a gift, thanks for sharing it with the rest of us =)
Good luck in my contest!
~~GRACE~~ -
GOLDEN
Wow! I am SO impressed with you! You have such range...and poetic ability.
I could NEVER master this type of write! But you did so with such ease and elegance. Very, very well done!
You have many, many angels here at AP who simply adore you! What does that say about you, sir? You are quite popular with us ladies, indeed!!!!!
Good luck in the contest, this will be difficult to top. Reads like GOLD to me.
Blessings! Tammy
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Dave this is a very good write that you had penned here my friend, your rhythm and rhyme flowed beautifully throughout the entire poem good luck in the contest
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dearest dave,
thank you so much for your contribution in my little contest. you have perfectly mastered the difficult form of a pantoum, and also revealed a wonderful message of hope and faith. I love angels as well, and can only understand your attraction to their soothing and uplifting energies. it is wonderful to see that you seem to be so connected to angels, and maybe there are even some angels on earth who surround you and spread their love on you ...
at least this is what I understood from reading the heartfelt comments of the members of your "fan-club"
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I truly enjoyed the simplicity of your truthful and faithful words in this poem, they go directly to the heart ...
thank you so much for such a precious gift.
much love,
maa -
This is indeed a lovely poem. May you always be surrounded by the love of friends and angels. You, my friend are one as well. Wonderfully crafted. Well done dear poet.
Good luck in the contest.
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Wonderful job, Dave! Different for you and you did it so very well. I feel as Dawn, I would much rather be your friend, friends are true, flrits are just that flirts.
You are so luck to be surrounded by so much love. You do have many Angels who love you.
The flow is wonderful in this.
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I am just so impressed! This is so dang incredible. Your talent just grows and grows. Nothing wrong with having so many angels for friends, we can all use some angels every once in a while. Good luck in the contest. Jeannie
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This is a very good piece you have written here beautifully worded and very cleverly written well done to you
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Dave...
My darling friend this is simply magnificent and I love every line you have created here...You are such a beautiful person my dearest friend...I know that you will do well with the contest...
Thanks for sharing my sweet angel...
Love ya
Tes 
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Very well done Bro, A Pantoum is a difficult thing to write and you did it well, they flow so well...Scott
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Well done. You handled this challenge well. There is a nice flow here. On the personal note, would rather have you as my friend than my flirt. For flirts fade away, friends last. Or at least mine do. So I embrace you and call you my friend. You mean the world to me. A friend is gods angel. Dawn
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