Everything has fallen apart.
I try to put it all back together,
But there’s nothing there.
That’s all this ever was. . . .
Nothing.
Everything we had was nothing,
Everything you said, and I said
Was a lie and it was all nothing.
Everything you felt might have been true,
But I’m sure that my feelings were hollow.
You can’t teach this broken angel
How to open her heart and trust again.
It’s useless trying to teach her how to love,
She is immune to that feeling,
To it’s pleasure and it’s pain.
All we ever had was nothing,
So I guess in the end I lost nothing.
If this is true then please tell me,
Why do I feel so broken up inside?
Author notes
I'm sure the person that this poem is about won't read it,,,,I'm not sure if that's a good thing or not
SMILE, TOMORROW WILL BE WORSE......
Written October 9th, 2006
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hey this poem is amazing you are a great writer and i love your work i hope i see you and your work soon and i hope you write more good luck with your amazng next writings and ill be sure to check it all out! AMAZING!!!
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"and if you dont mind me to ask who is this to"
No, I don't mind, I've stopped caring. This poem is to a certain someone who promised a lot of things but never fulfilled them, who tricked me into seeing the lighter side of life, and who is always grounded for long periods of time. This poem is to my current boyfriend,,,,and when I wrote this poem I was frustrated about the way me and his relationship is going.
Kat -
hay whats wrong you ok this one allmost mad me cry it sounds to painfull to dig to deep into i hope it will all be ok and beast of luck for you oh and if you dont mind me to ask who is this to oh and im saying this to all on my fav list would you join my contest i need more people
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