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Fit in Place

Your soft longing stare
And your warm sensual touch
The gentle brush of your hair
Is what I love so much

Your arms wrapped around me
And your lips against mine
Both breathing deeply
With chills running up my spine

Holding hands in the night
With fingers laced
Sets everything right
Makes everything fit in place

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Written October 9th, 2006

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  • nowsleepmylover
    October 16, 2006
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    This is making me cry its so beautiful!


  • JoyfulWriter
    October 9, 2006
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    I truly enjoyed this beautiful piece of poetry! left me speechless and wanting to read more of your outstanding work! Smiles, Terry