Have you ever thought about it?
Ending it all?
Ever been so tempted
Ever felt the pain that drowns
Stabs you deep inside
Like a hand reaching
Deep into the chasm of bones
And tearing out your heart
There are no nights
For there is no day
In a world where there is no hope
No light at the end of the tunnel
At times it seems there is only one way
One solution
Death could be a sanctuary
A slice of heaven
No worries
No fears
No pain
What will it be tonight my dear?
A gun, a knife, or pills for one?
Make a glorious scene with your insides out
Matter all over the floor
Or more considerate are we to others
Just take the pills for a happy ever after
You could make yourself a tidy smile
One ear to another
Whatever the assistant may be
Grateful for ever after
Release from this painful existence
Left to be free
Forever
Author notes
Hey me thinks this would be 3/4 nt sure what you wanan say it is.... dunno if what ur lookin for but meh
Written October 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- Dark, Angst, Cutting,Morbid, Suicide, Depression by -Tears Of Pain-.
1000 points, ended November 13, 2006, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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doesnt matter if your not sure what it is the person is looking for, the fact is they asked for something and if you havent given what they want, they havent explained it properly, hence my contest rules and talks always go on for ages.... anyway, great poem huni, good luck in the contest. l8az love always sky xxx
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Good job!...It is what I'm looking for so no worries there. And your words flowed so well...And each line just fit with the next....Theys a poem needs...flow and grace...even if morbid...lol..I would just like to say great job!! Good luck in the contest!!
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awsome poem hunni
although abit morbid but hey its a morbid comp see you tomorow!!! x huggles x
you oh so sexy boyfriend frederic mandrake
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