I was floating in the midst of poem,
mother appeared showering affection there,
she was God sent gift for them,
who are burning in life’s fire…
mother appeared showering affection there,
always smiling to those with a blissful hug,
who are burning in life’s fire,
to remove pain, a screeching bug…
always smiling to those with a blissful hug,
spreading a message of love far and wide,
to remove pain, a screeching bug,
blessed her child in dream, initiated to guide…
spreading a message of love far and wide,
made the girl in France her disciple,
blessed her child in dream, initiated to guide,
awakened her soul, made heart purple…
made the girl in France her disciple,
sound of silence is her creation,
awakened her soul, made heart purple,
silence which talks of marvelous devotion…
sound of silence is her creation,
I was adored to have a look,
silence which talks of marvelous devotion,
blissful sound not written in any book…
I was adored to have a look,
she was God sent gift for them,
blissful sound not written in any book,
I was floating in the midst of poem…
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Author notes
Her child is my sister in AP, Maa
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A contest entry
- SPIRITUAL, MYSTICAL, INSPIRATIONAL ~ PANTOUMS 1~ by maa.
333 points, ended October 13, 2006, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - FILL THE VOID WITH GOLD AND HEAL MY HEARTACHE by maa.
777 points, ended August 24, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything we can be by hammy66.
650 points, ended September 16, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - whatever you want by Anonymous Shadow.
600 points, ended October 1, 2007, 119 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poems Of Giving by Poetess12.
900 points, ended March 5, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - SILVER TO GOLD - FOR PARTICIPANTS OF ONE OF MY FORMER CONTESTS by maa.
656 points, ended August 14, 2008, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - You Are My Friend; Someone Special by Heavenly Angel.
700 points, ended November 8, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A fine sharing this is!
Thank you for being part of the contest and sharing your gift to your friend
Congratulations on all the awards this has received; much deserving!
All the best to you! -
This is a beautifully written poem; I loved it!!
Thankyou so much for entering, and I wish you the best of luck
Maria
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Beautiful. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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This pantoum is a beautiful tribute to Marion - I was particularly struck by
"she was God sent gift for them,
blissful sound not written in any book"
Congratulations for all your awards!
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hahaha, your page is already abundantly decorated with my comments ...
what else can I add ?
I can only thank you to have presented your soulful verse in this contest, so your little sister may remember that she is loved by her Mother and by her big brother ...
what more can I ask for ?
thank you from my deepest heart,
lil sister maa
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welcome back, brother !
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IMPRESSIVE IT WAS AMAZING I THINK THIS ONE WILL GET A GOOD MARK BRAVO
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just stopping by to contemplate your wonderful poetic offering again ...
thank you so much ...
marion
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This poem has good imagery. I like it!
Thanks for your entry in my contest.
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First, congrats on the two silver trophies and the honorable mention. I found this to be a pretty powerful piece full of love and great admiration. Well done thank you for entering.
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how can I forget this wonderful gift of yours, my brother ? it still touches me in the same way as it did when you first offered it to me ...
thank you so much,
maa
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my dearest brother,
may the joy you brought me with your poem return to you a thousandfold.
may your kind heart overflow with grace and blessings bestowed upon you by the Divine Mother Ammachi.
may She bring abundance, joy, happiness and bliss to your soul, may She protect your family and yourself on your path on earth, may She inspire you strength, courage, wisdom and devotion on your spiritual path, may Her arms receive all your pain and sadness and transform them into peace ...
much, much love to you,
my dearest brother,
your didi -
my dearest brother,
I am very humbled and truly grateful for your most graceful and precious offering. your words touch me deeply and I smiled about the many elements you have weaved into your poems, which I recognized beeing the essence of our recent conversations and some of my poems you have so kindly read.
what touches me most is the fact that you have succeeded to create a poem in this challenging form, which has deep meaning and witnesses of faith, devotion and spiritual love.
I know how much care you have put into your poem, I can sense it deep within my heart. I thank you so much for this very personal and intimate proof of spiritual brotherhood to this little maa here ...
your didi
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