living in a tiny little box
painted white top to bottom
end to end
a box
of my own
my true
peaceful heaven
all i ask
is for a box of sharpies
that will make me happy
to draw on what contains me
and to breath in the fumes
to be dragged away to far
into darkness, I'm consumed
little did they know
and little will i tell
i chose this heaven
this would be your hell
but its OK to sneak a peek
at something that will never be
for if its truly to your interest
in a cardboard box
is where you'll find me.
Author notes
Written October 8th, 2006
A contest entry
- The Best of the Best by FallenAngel09.
400 points, ended October 25, 2006, 44 entries
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Thank you so much for your entry into my contest, your talent and hard work are very much appreciated. I loved it, loved it, and simply loved it. Wow, a fantastically written poem, and don't really have much else to say except, WOW. Great job and good luck.
Tiphanie -
Wow .. dont really know what to say, trippin' love it Tess,
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I loved this. The name took me in and the poem made me happy to have seen it! I love the colours and the format. I also can find a little tune for this so thats fun ^.^ good job!
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