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Mental Man

Mental Man
…
Caught my breath
Brightened these eyes
Picked me up

Mental Man
…
Shined so brilliantly
Cold as spring ice water
Yet burned so painfully

Mental Man
…
Tore my life away
Broke me down today
Tore my heart in two

Mental Man
…
Left me alone
Went far, far away
Merely to hurt me

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This is bland and boring, but comment away anyhow!
Written October 8th, 2006

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  • Shanendoa
    March 17, 2007
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    Suicide

    The author of this poem needs to be shot.