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Falling

I can hear your song singing in my heart
It keeps you alive in this soul of mine
And each day that we spent apart
My love for you grows
It will never die.
Tear drops fall from the moonlit sky
Rusted maple leaves drop from its mother branch
Just like them I fall for you,
Day
After day
After day.

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For my sweet pet Lady Stone,
Because we keep failing to cross paths lately.
Written October 8th, 2006

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  • sunshinegirl
    October 12, 2006
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    This is really sweet! So tender! What a beautiful thought! something magical in this piece. Keep that pen flowing!

  • Erotik Rose silver member
    October 8, 2006
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    Oh... this is very sweet and touching, I hope you two can cross those paths more often.

    Erotik Rose

  • Shannon62875
    October 8, 2006
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    aww this is very sweet! its aweosme you took the time to write this about your girl! its so sweet, i wish my man would do this for me but he aint that way, she is so lucky to have you/of had you!!! keep up the great work!!


    Shannon*Leah


    Hope everything works out!

  • October 8, 2006
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    CAN YOU SEE INTO MY EYES LIKE OPEN DOORS HAHAHAHA_l_AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
  • scotttigger1
    October 8, 2006
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    very nice work. keep it up

  • greyhaime silver member
    October 8, 2006
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    yes, to much time not spent in each others company...
    it will get better this week,,promise..


    Krystal
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