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You Are

You Are:

In your presence Lord
everything is as it
should be you are the
Lord you are the Lord
you are most high
above the earth
You are my Lord you
are my Lord so high
above the earth.

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Written October 8th, 2006

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  • mellymo15
    October 8, 2006
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    once again, you capture it so perfectly. I love how you write. this is great.
    mel


  • October 8, 2006
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    CAN YOU SEE INTO MY EYES LIKE OPEN DOORS HAHAHAHAH


  • scotttigger1
    October 8, 2006
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    this is really good work. It is very brave of you to show religion on the site