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Now...

Giving a quiet stroking
To the past...
I know NOW,
It has breathed it's last.

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Coming to grips with reality..now...
Written August 10th, 2006

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  • individuality gold member
    October 8, 2006
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    a good piece though the ending here it's should be its last. aye the past, we have to let it go with a smile sometimes. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...