So bright is the Light
that I want to follow
At times I get closer
but now I feel hollow
So much to see
So much to learn
This place I want
I know I must learn
Author notes
This poem was written when I was young in an all night cafe after a one night stand. Hoped to regain some dignity I guess.
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Bravo
what wisdom in just a few words. Your poem is beautiful and the picture I just think it is perfect for your poem. Great content, great imagery, and great flow.
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Short, sweet, and honost, good job.
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Quiet Introspection
Yes, that kind of activity makes us feel like this, I , too, am no stranger to the feeling. You have accomplished much by this posting; your light is shining bright, dear friend. A wonderful write on its own as well. Good luck in the contest. Walt.
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Wow
I really like this one..
Its really awsome!!
well done
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vivid and concise
I really see where you are going with this one Donny, I really like it. I noticed that the last line is very ambiguous. Wondering I guess if that was the intention? Sensitively written with the hint of a youthful rememberance! Nice!
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