A place...
A place and time...
A none-existent place in frozen time
Where certain souls collide to dance to rhyme
Where music trickles through the heart
Where perfect love becomes an art
Where satisfaction renders me a mime
A none-existent place in frozen time
A place and time...
A place...
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Written October 8th, 2006
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Ponderous
The soul starts to search a place ... and led to time, it starts to search the dream (the "non-existent" perfection of love into an art).
A very good abstraction of that which takes place when two souls meet -- truly TOUCH -- to form this divine "place".
Love
Myra
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Thank you
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...never left
just get super busy and can't write like I'd like to
Thanks for leaving a comment - it means a lot.
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glad you're back.....
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I don't know exactly but something about this touched me deeply. I recently experience just such a time and place. One of those magical times when time seems frozen and all the emotions warm the soul.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
ps. Long time no see..... fellow texan -
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Thank you for the visit.
Yes, it's true. I have not been on here much lately.
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holy moooly, this is amazing, i really liked the form and how you wrote that excellent work ! thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!
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