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On Top of the World

Sitting on top of the world with you
watching the sunset through your eyes,
makes the whole world spin in new directions.

Your eyes sparkle with the golden colours of the sun
you really make it so much fun.
As the sun finally goes to rest,
your eyes hold the colors that we all enjoy the best.

The golden colours that show your warmth of your heart,
as you hold your body close to mine,
never let the colours die
because I don't want no other guy.

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Written October 7th, 2006

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  • XCaramelxSweetieX69
    October 22, 2006
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    Awww how sweet! I know exactly how you feel for I feel the same way about my fiance. Nicely done. Thank you for entering, and the best of luck to you in the contest.
    ~Jessica~