Upon the rim of the Ocean
Where time began
With just one step
Author notes
I want to thank Sharcu for such an inspirational contest, and the opportunity to participate...aho Little Fawn
Written October 7th, 2006
A contest entry
- Let the Picture Inspire - #5 by Sharcu.
300 points, ended October 8, 2006, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Excellent
Short...to the point... very lovely. It is beautiful. I am proud of my Daughter of the heart... Spiritsong -
What a beautiful poem
Daughter, here I go again, reading this wonderful poem and writing you another message. May the Spirits shine brightly upon you and may you always know you are loved. Spiritsong -
Excellent
You did a great job with this one, dear one... I think that certainly captured the picture and I saw it by reading what you have written here.
Spiritsong
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thank you for the opportunity to write for a contest of this nature. Now I have to go and read the winners entries...and I am Honored by your review of this word gift...again, thank you! aho Little Fawn
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Wow... I'm left speachless... Amazing interpretation of this picture! Well done! Thanks for entering
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thank you for your words in review and for taking the time to write them...aho Little Fawn
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I agree the picture is wonderful
and so are your words
Thanks for sharing
warm thoughts
Frozentearz
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