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The girl i see

When i look in the mirror
All i can see
Is this little plain girl
Staring back at me

She's damaged with scars
And broken by pain
See past her eyes
Her mind's gone insane

but the one that she loves
can never define
to him, his little dove
is perfectly fine

But i can't listen anymore
To the words that are said
The girl in the mirror
I wish she were dead

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Written October 7th, 2006

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  • Snapshot Dreamer
    December 29, 2006
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    Smile sweets... Lovely piece though.


  • Emo Hearted Emz
    December 6, 2006
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    don't get yourself down chick

    i love this poem is this bout you hun your so pritty i love the way you write but please don't get yourself down u knw were i am if you want to tlk i tryto help in the best way i can. you r so nice to me i'm glad i met you on this friendly site.
    your poem is fantastic. i love it


  • blueyez
    October 22, 2006
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    no no no you better learn to cherish that beautiful girl in the mirror sniffs! I love that special girl and so should you!