Making love is about two people
losing themselves in each other,
no restraints, no pressure, no expectations
just relaxing and becoming immersed in the experience,
having fun, making mistakes, giggling,
closeness, heat,
feeling each other out with closed eyes and searching hands,
tasting each other,
falling away, being pulled with the tide
getting carried away and biting or scratching,
worrying about people hearing or seeing yet not giving a damn,
pushing ones limitations but always feeling safe,
security and trust,
nurturing each other, drawing sustenance
and all the while learning and growing…
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I'm gonna sing the doom doom song now!
Written October 7th, 2006
A contest entry
- Sexual Experience by cali951.
300 points, ended May 18, 2007, 10 entries
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I want to say thanks for everyone that entered my contest it was very hard to judge this contest because the poems were all good and i loved reading them.I had a blast reading them good job and to the people who didnt win you all did a great job.
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I really like this poem it was short sweet and just likeable good job in my contest and my favorite line is "worrying about people hearing or seeing yet not giving a damn" so good job and good luck in my contest ok
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beautiful
that is a correct interpretation of making love and how it should be. not some bumping and grinding for selfish release. two people totally absorbed in one another. its beyond the physical, it goes to the spiritual and emotional plane. to me the ultimate act of love between two people. your imagery was lovely. you gave the reader a view into a loving relationship. -
True!
This is so real. I love the part about having fun, making mistakes, giggling... how very true is that. Often we glamorize love-making into just what we see on tv and then we are left wondering why our experience wasn't the same. Everyone should read this one!!!
Kudos to you on this very real and very fresh poem! -
aaaawwwwww....sweet...
just reading this makes me feel warm and content...love it!!!
*zara*
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