One and Only
There’s a sympathy that can lure
An innocent into no cure
Or a presence that's near
Can trigger that dramatic fear
“Don’t let them die” she was saying
But no one heard her pointless praying
Sitting on the plane
Felling numbness, no pain
Like you’re a child afraid, scared
Wishing, praying that somebody cared
The isolation of the homeliness
The hurt so bad, the loneliness
You felt like you had no way out
The happiness so remote
That you felt choked
Your tears roll And now they seize
As your child’s sole
Drifts away in the midnight breeze
All I wish was
That you were here
I cry when I realize
That you’ll never be near
That fatal day
It took you away
Away from your home
Now your parents, they cry alone
Well, goodbye my friend
You will be missed
All my love I send
And a heavenly kiss
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Very good poem with some great lines I really liked
"Like you’re a child afraid, scared
Wishing, praying that somebody cared"
These are amazing lines, many others too. That it is a (seems) sad personal write is unfortunate; keep writing. -
omg yasmin this is sooo good!! i dont no wether 2 cry or not lol!!! this is justt da best you hav ever wrote rlli it is!!! uve got a tallent girl nd u shudnt throw it away!! xxx
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This was a good poem, I liked the imagery, for example ‘as your child’s soul (I think it should be soul otherwise it’s kind of surreal) drifts away in the midnight breeze’. I liked the rhyme which you used here, it didn’t seem constrained to any rhyme-scheme, it just seemed natural. I’m sorry that this write is personal (that’s the impression I got from your author’s comments) Keep writing, this was a very sad poem
Best wishes
Pozo
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