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Can't You See?

How many times must my heart break
To make you believe
How many tears must I cry
To make you see

How many ways must I show my love
To make you understand
How many ways can I avoid your eyes
To make your comprehension expand?

Can't you see the hurt?
Or feel the pain?
Do you even notice me?
Or that nothing is the same?

The answers lie in your eyes
And they tell me you do
But fear gets the best of you.....

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Written October 6th, 2006

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  • Navygurl04
    October 25, 2006
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    You know what? i didn't even really have to read all of this. It's actually not bad, kind of how i am feeling about my ex at this point! hope everything is going good with you girlie!!!!


  • Courage2Survive
    October 10, 2006
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    This is awesome girl! I just love it! You must be going through some rough, confusing times right now as far as men go. Just know that I'm here to pick up the broken pieces of your heart. I love you very much.