My love has gone blind
I might as well, leave everything behind
I haven’t seen why love is great
Coz when I did, it turns to hate
It really annoys me, that I never get chance
To be with her, or even have a dance
Not even a hug
But when I don’t bother, they always bug me
It’s really, really shit
I would rather hope that, that was the worst bit
But it wasn’t, it got worse
I never knew, how low she was
To act like a little snob
I’m glad I don’t want her, touching my knob
Coz if she did, she would try to rip it off
Good thing I don’t like her
I found out what she was like
Off I go, on my bike
Out of that place, to somewhere better
When I checked my pocket, I found a letter
From some girl from the disco
I didn’t realize, and didn’t know
That this certain girl would like me
I really found it hard to see
Why would she? I’m no one special
Once I read it all I went back
Then I saw her at the front
And then I pulled a crazy stunt
I saw that guy that was being a prick
So I went up to him, and backhanded him with a stick
Right in front of the girl that wrote the letter
I went up to her, and felt like asking her
Why didn’t you tell me earlier?
She told me why, it made me sort of blush
Then we left in a rush
We went to park, then kissed
It turned out being the best night of me life
Author notes
Written October 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- A Lovers Question by DrkPoet.
450 points, ended March 12, 2008, 27 entries
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Lots of emotions going on through the whole poem ending very sweetly. Thanks for entering
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love it. sorry i don't know what that feels like, but i bet it hurt a lot. i keep telling myself that someday a guy will like me enough to ask me out, but... who am i kidding? no one likes me that way. all the guys i know think of me as one of the guys, because i'm not a girly girl. i like to go mudding, hunting, mushrooming, and racing gocarts. so it's kind of hard to find a guy. you would think they would want someone like that, but i guess i'm wrong. keep doing what you do
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Beautiful
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it's also breathtakingly romantic...i read it the second time and it really took me up more this time...truly a brilliant poem
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of my life
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cuz if she did i think that's what u meant there
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lol, this poem is brilliant, the words are mature and outstanding...it's hanging in my head...
My love has gone blind
I might as well, leave everything behind
I haven’t seen why love is great
Coz when I did, it turns to hate
It really annoys me, that I never get chance
To be with her, or even have a dance
Not even a hug
this part is just so cool, you wrote this pretty well..it's sad and the words could make someone wish you were hers..anyway, way to go!!! keep up with the good work
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