An Erotic, Romantic Cruise (Story - Part Two)
The following morning, Dew stirred and Draco woke up. They were still in Dew's bed and their naked bodies were touching. Draco began playing with Dew's hair and he kissed her cheeks. She woke up a few minutes later, and looking at herself and then at Draco, she smiled and kissed his lips. Draco got up and went to the bathroom. When he got out, Dew was not in bed. Breakfast was on the table and the door to the deck was open. He grabbed some juice and went out. Just as he came on the deck he heard a splash and saw Dew's head get out of the water. Draco stood drinking his juice and watching her.
At first, Dew pretended she did not see Draco and swam farther from the boat. The she got back and looked up at him. His skin glistened in the sunlight and her sight fell on his manhood. Draco looked at her for a few seconds, then, she turned and swam on her back revealing her orange-strapless bikini. After a few minutes, Draco jumped into the water too. It was cold but the sight of Dew approaching made him forget that. They swam silently for a bit, whereas every time Dew went in a direction, Draco apparated in front of her. Finally, they stood opposite each other, moving their legs only to stay afloat. Draco untied Dew’s bra-top and pushed it away, somehow it floated. He began cupping her breasts and playing with her nipples, while she felt around for his ass.
“Ouch!” Dew let out a little shout, “What did you pinch me for?”
“I didn’t pinch you, I swear!” Draco answered in surprise.
“There you’re doing it again. Cut it out!”
Draco raised his hands in the air and said “See no hands, it’s not me!”
“Then what in the world is it?”
The Draco let out a loud yelp of pain that Dew jumped back. He grabbed her towards him and apparated them both back on the deck. Below, Dew’s bra-top was being devoured by fish, which love the orange colour and were mistaking it for food. Now, the mystery was solved. But, Draco let out another cry of pain. Dew turned and found a fish the size of his hand biting at his manhood. Draco tried hitting it with his hand but it would not let go. Dew laid her hand on the fish. There was a bright blue flash and the fish let go and dropped to the ground, wriggling. Dew moved her hand again as if directing the fish back into the water and the fish flew into it.
Dew sat on her knees. There was some blood on Draco’s manhood. So, she grabbed a towel and pressed it on the wound. It hurt Draco, but he remained silent. She removed the towel, the blood had stopped but she could see where the fish’s teeth had been and it was all red. She began stroking Draco’s penis and then began licking it. She moved from up, down to the tip. Draco forgot the pain and began to become hard. After a few more licks, where his penis glistened under the sun, with Dew’s saliva, Dew put his whole manhood into her mouth. Draco began to moan loudly and he began playing with her hair. He pulled her hair slightly when her tongue licked him hard and quick.
Another ‘crack’ and they were both in the bath-tub in the same position. Dew went on eating Draco for at least another half hour while Draco continued to moan with pleasure, and finally he cummed. When Dew was done, she let his manhood out of her mouth and looked up at him. He took her hand and made her stand up. When she did, he pulled her and held her tight and began nibbling at her ear. His hands went for the remaining part of her bikini and off it fell to the tub-floor. Then, he spanked her ass. Dew looked at him and their lips met. Somehow they managed to turn on the water and warm water fell on their naked salty bodies. Their hands continued to feel each other’s bodies. Finally, they pulled apart. Dew sat on her knees and Draco sat behind her. He put some shampoo on her hair and stroked her head, till it became white with little shampoo bubbles. Draco continued with the soap as he massaged her body, playing with her soapy-slippery breasts, then, moving to her arms and legs. He washed himself too, then, they both stood up and Draco washed the soap and shampoo from all over Dew. She did the same to him. Waving her hand, two towels wrapped around them, and with that they left the bathroom.
Draco pulled off his towel as soon as he got to Dew’s room. Dew simply watched him. He took her towel and began rubbing it against her body and drying her. Then, he threw it away and lay Dew on the bed. She watched him silently, as he went on the bed on all fours and approached her. He entered her and rode her, while playing with her breasts and nipples and his tongue kissed hers.
“Aaaaahhhhhh” Dew moaned loudly.
Draco pulled himself out of Dew’s body. “No! No!” Dew said, but Draco put a finger on her lips and shushed her. He turned and came over her head, his manhood dangling over her face. She let out her tongue trying to lick it but Draco teased her with it for a while. She tried raising her head, but it was not much help because Draco had stood up.
“That’s no fair!” she grumbled.
“No, but this is!” he said with a devilish smile. And he sat on her face and stretched his body over hers. He spread her legs and began fingering and licking her at the same time. Dew took Draco’s whole manhood into her mouth and ate at it and licked it and did everything her mouth let her. They both moaned in each other’s bodies. They devoured each other for quite a while.
Finally, they let go of each other and Draco turned and faced his girl. She smiled at him but was exhausted. Her legs still open, so he entered her one more time and kissed her lips, while their four hands played with Dew’s breasts. With a wave of Dew’s hand the covers slipped from under them and covered them, from head to toe, in their position. They let out more moans and groans.
“I love you!” Dew whispered.
“I love you too, honey!” Draco whispered back and kissed her till they both fell asleep in each other’s arms.
Author notes
Well I finally part two is here.
For those who have not read part I, here is the link:
allpoetry.com/Poem/2169883
This is the link to part THREE: http://allpoetry.com/poem/2533218
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Written October 6th, 2006
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A Very powerful part:D
I didn't realise that they had magical powers
but I guess I did now.Thatpart was really HOT!
I think u've succeeded in portraying the strong passion and love in ths part.
I loved it!Good job
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Hot! Good story. Makes me wish I were young again. See my poem "Giving Up Sex".
At first I was confused, not realizing that they have magical powers.
Could use a bit of editing, for example the following suggestions for the beginning:
Line 2: "head get out" -- Change to "rise out" or "pop out".
Line 3: "she got back" -- Change to "came back" or "swam back" or "returned". "whereas" -> "but". Change "stood" to "stayed" or "remained"; they were not standing.
I'll stop here to save time and digital ink.
I look forward to reading more of your story in the future.
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Thank you for reading and for your suggestions zilbermann. I am glad you liked it. I'll revise it and see what I can do with your suggestions. I'll be sure to IM you when I post part 3. It'll be here soon, coz I'll finish my mid-year exams tomorrow! So I'll be writing and posting the rest of the series SOON!
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Nice
Very hot and sultry piece; much enjoyed the passion and love that was portrayed in every line of this! Excellent!
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Thank you so much, I'll be sure to IM you then when I post part III, I'll be done with it when I finish my exams. Thankx again
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You use vivid imagery- but there are little details that nag at me. Like in part one, "they had sex for a few hours" or something to that effect. And here, "Dew went on eating Draco for at least another half hour." The mention of time was a bit of a turn-off; sexual encounters have no time... only passion and pleasure. I'd cut those bits out.
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well u deserved both
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Thankx and yeah you're right. it's AP's fault lol!
Thankx for reading, commenting and applauding! 
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bravo! i really liked it i read every now and then such novels my favorite are by sandra brown and nora roberts and i think you have an amazing style keep on going and whenever i can i keep on reading and oh by d way AP afsadetna kollina lol
salam -
no comment.
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Thank you Fossil, for the comment. I am glad you enjoyed the read.
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mmmm...got such a huge hard on..thats the success of your description...I was almost there myself enjoying shampoo washed skin ..carry on the action..
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What a great poem to read. It makes me sigh for love, very beautifully written! It makes me want to fall in love, and it's been a while since I felt that way. This flows perfectly and soft.
This poem even has a sweet mystic sense to it. Well thought out..nicely done. A great expression of a deep image of natural truth. And the last few lines gave me a sonnet kinda vibe. All in all, very enjoyable. Well done and thank you for sharing. This is a great poem. I love it all... the poem, the background, the topic....it's all great. keep writing......you have a lot to offer. -
Thankx Pheonix. I am glad you enjoyed my erm.. naughty story Thank you for applauding it too.
Nooni 
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Whoaaaaa.... I agree with deliverance! What HAVE you been watching?! Sheesh! You got very ummm, descriptive! Like, wowwwww, SEX! OMG. This was one of the best of these I've ever read! Great job!
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Thank you for reading, commenting And Applauding Mr. Joe. I am glad you enjoyed reading my story!
Nooni
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too much is never enough--very lively description of what happens when love and lust become one. Mr. Joe
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Thank you so much Myron for your lovely comment on my story. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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i like the imaginative mix in this fascinating story - the start is good and refreshing and then the biting fish is quite extraordinary. the story moves on nicely into the bathroom where its erotisism rises and ebbs in a wonderful way and the story ends on a lovely loving note.
well done.
best wishes,
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Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed it. Lazem 2a3taref AP 2afsadetny rasmy! I haven't been watching, just reading every now and then Thankx for the applaud.
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kenti bet2ouli eh? ana lli say3a? danti say3a mot!!!
This is super hot!
My god woman!!! what have you been watching!
Too much intensity and sensuality!
Loved every bit!!!
Just amazing!!!!
Keep it out!!
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Thank you so much Jeannie (I consider you the expert here
) so it's great that you enjoyed it. Please check out part one as well, although I think this is better.
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Whew!! Dayum girl, this is great! I got so lost in the story!! Sign of a talented writer!! Good luck in the contest. Jeannie D Hunter
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Thank you Room
I am glad you enjoyed reading this. Thank you for applauding. Let me dig you that fantasy poem I wrote a few days ago
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Outstanding
“I love you!” Dew whispered.
“I love you too, honey!” Draco whispered back and kissed her till they both fell asleep in each other’s arms.
I thought this had a lot of originality and is very raw, contemporary and erotic. Different to your usual fantasy poetry which I like so much! -
Thankx Sunshine! I am glad you enjoyed reading. Part three will be sure to come and I promise to IM you when I post it. Thankx for reading
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Nooni,
I really hope that there is more to this, as it seems abit unfinished to me, but good grief girl, you do have a way of showing me (the reader) exactly what you want me to see and no more or no less!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are really good at these! I truly enjoyed this one! Keep that pen flowing. -
Thankx again Twilight. I believe you found part two to be more interesting than part one. I guess I like more too
Thank you for applauding my story. I am no expert when it comes to erotic vocabulary but I'll try harder. I will IM you when I post part 3.
Nooni
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NIce way to get the juices flowing for your readers! Would have applauded part one, but wanted to see if part 2 held up to standards.
YOu need a bit more of vocabulary variety. YOu use the word "ate" too much. Otherwise, sexy. -
Thank you so much V. I am glad you enjoyed reading this. I was so embarrassed when I wrote and posted these stories lol. Thank you for applauding and I will be sure to IM you when I write part 3
Nooni
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Good job once again. Usually I don'e enjoy reading these types of stories, but I have made an exception for you. I was pulled in from the begining and I actually have found myself enjoying this. I can't wait to see what happens next! Make sure you keep me posted as to when part 3 comes along! no pun intended. haha
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Thank you so much Light. You just made me very happy. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for applauding it too. Please check out part one as well. Although, I do believe part Two is better.
Thank you so much, Nooni
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Steamy
WOW! A very stimulating piece, pun intended. I would have never thought of the rough foreplay coming from an orange roughy or some some aquatic nibbler. Very creative and sweet transition into a more conventional position for an erotic setting. I too can't wait for the next chapter of this naughty little tale. I think you deserve to be applauded as I find myself giving this one a standing ovation! -
I am so glad you enjoyed reading this. Thank you for applauding it too.
Here is the link to part one: allpoetry.com/Poem/2169883
I will be sure to IM you when I post part 3
Nooni
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OMG!!! I'm loving this story and I'm dying to see what happens next. You know I never actually thought of making an Erotica story with Draco in it but this story i absolutely amazing. You really did a great job. Keep it up im just dying to see what happens next. Emily
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Thankx Dutch I am glad you enjoyed it
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a great write Nooni, very sensual, very hot.
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Thankx Warious I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the applaud. I will revise it and see what I can do. I try to keep with short sentences so as not to get lost with run-on sentences lol. But I'll re-read it again
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I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for applauding.
Nooni
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good but can be better with better sentance s
Nice use of the 69 position. (Have often thought about that one too ^_^)
What kind of fish was that? A pirranah?
Overall, a VERY nice job ^_^
I would, however, reccomend useing more complex sentance structure. Your paragraphs were a bit choppy in places because of this.
Other than that I think this was a very erotic piece with lots of "juice". *wink wnk*
Good luck in the contest!
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it was great =] i loved it =]
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