Time is always moving,never stopping.
It lingers on and on.
Even after death, it still moves.
If the world comes to end,
where does time go?
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Think and reply with your thoughts. But don't think too hard. *Option 5 for contest
Written October 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- Options Contest, Allowing Prewrites by AlternateCandidate.
500 points, ended August 13, 2007, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I think that this is a very good thought and an intriguing question, but it does not strike me poetically. Also, the format is a little distracting, as if you didn't mean for it to be a poem at all. Thank you for entering.
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It goes to the same place i talk about here....this is really deep....
Follow me....
Time is an untangible thought labeled to control the way life works...
Read my poem "Eyes Closed"
it's awesome thought here...like it... -
learn 2 write a little more and I can see a future in potry for you.
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It makes ya think and its worth reading
I was thinking the same thing as serious clown, but I dont think there is life on other planets, but for your question...my answer would be: when the world ends time ends. I always like a good question, thanks for a great write.
amanda
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nice write
This is a very interesting thought,and well put,I think time is only universal because we apply it to the universe,if there is life on other planets they may have a different way of measuring distances and not use what we know as time at all,I like the poem though,it make you think and that has to be good for the brain, best wishes.
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